Little Sample Of My Song I Made Dedicated to CarAudio.com!!

[SethPhillips 5,000+ posts]

When u were born u looked like a trollyo momma was like damn, i should'a taken by birth control.

/thread.

ohhh snap son!

 

[22mountaineer 10+ year member]

Dont all white people descriminate? Nothing has changed, you better pull ya heat on all of us

 

[newusername 10+ year member]

Wow....I think this is the worst thread I've ever read on the internet.

I think I just lost my faith in humanity.....

 

[bass maniak 10+ year member]

Ummmmmm.......NO....thats weak and recorded like shit

No flow at all, way to ruin a decent beat.

Could have at least put some reverb, delay, dubs and laced the vocals a little cleaner.

Why you would post this.....idk. Looking to get flamed???

 

[luvinthebass 5,000+ posts]

no one gives a shit if you are black we just can't understand your ebonics bullshit.
Here practice this while flowing at the bus stop tomorrow before school and come back tomorrow to show us what you have learned. Then we can move on to Vocabulary capish?

Chorus:

Whatcha gonna do? Whatcha gonna say?

If you don't know punctuation.

Punctuation marks - they make your writing smart

And keep your meaning clear in any situation

Periods are first on our list of punctuation marks

They end every sentence before a new one starts

(and) if you're using numbers in a list or outline

put one after every number and you will be fine

Next up is the question mark It's a period with a curl on top

Use it after every question that you write down

Sometimes in Spanish it's upside down

The punctuation mark that we use the most is called a comma

and that is no joke

If you have to list several things in a row use a comma to help keep your flow

For example:

"I had bacon eggs cereal and juice for breakfast .

Use commas in your address to separate the street from the city and the city from the state

and also when you write dates like January second, two thousand and eight

Phrases and words that describe different terms are set off by commas, now listen and learn

"Music a collection of sounds is the way we get down."

Two related ideas hooked together by a comma are called a compound sentence, no need for drama

"Punctuation confused me for a long time, but now it's easy 'cause I learned this rhyme!"

Chorus:

Whatcha gonna do? Whatcha gonna say?

If you don't know punctuation.

Punctuation marks - they make your writing smart

And keep your meaning clear in any situation

An exclamation point expresses strong feeling, like excitement

when somebody is screaming

Enclose the words of a speaker in quotation marks

They tell you when the talking stops and starts...

When you have to break a word into two syllables...

Compound words are also linked with a hyphen...

Often it's cool to make two words into one

an apostrophe gets the job done...

Chorus:

Whatcha gonna do? Whatcha gonna say?

If you don't know punctuation.

Punctuation marks - they make your writing smart

And keep your meaning clear in any situation

There are situations when you need to show possession...

And that's using punctuation

This is the stuff you've got to know if your writing's gonna flow

So take your time and learn this rhyme

and keep hitting the books

We'll be back with more raw hooks

LMFAO