Track 12 was tight as hell. I didn't care for the others though. But I don't really care for that southern sound. One suggestion I would make is slow down the beats per minute, most of the tracks seem a little "frantic" if that's an accurate description. Later.
4 was good. 6 ditch the sqeaky tire in the background. 7 sounds like a love song.10 was good. 12 wasnt to great. 13 when i fart it sounds better.15 is a striaght banger.17 is the i hate to love it beat but would bang it for a while
7,10,12,15,17 were tight mmm i would ulimately say. they sound a little more old school wich i like. try to get all the over used sounds out of there. like the tires and then the quick bass dropp. try a longer bass line with all of them.
I really only liked 4 & 7, even if the piano was pretty much the same; I like those sentimental/passive-aggresive beats. soundclick.com/jdubfromthechi has some of my stuff. I haven't made beats in a long time however.
Truthfully, they all sucked except for number 17. Don't take my feedback seriously though because I'm still stuck in the 90's with my rap preferences (2pac, Pre-Stillmatic Nas, etc...)