who here understands spanish well (brock, i need ya)?

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

i have a compositions due on thursday and i just started it. nothing big, simple mla format (spanish IV is teh pwn with papers //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/frown.gif.a3531fa0534503350665a1e957861287.gif ) needs to be about a half page. someone please proofread this for me and i hope no one will be a dick and ruin this thread.

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Un muchacho le entra la clinica de una doctora. El habla, “Doctora, tengo un dolor del estómogo muy furioso. No me siento bien.” La Doctora le examina el paciente muy cuidadosamente. El paciente es muy nerviosa y la doctora no sabe porque. El no tuve las enfermedades infantiles. Ella le toma la temperatura y una radiografia. Ella no mira nada.

“¿Muchacho, donde estan los dolores en tu cuerpo?” Habla la doctora

“Doctora, me duele en todos los partes, pero mi estomogo no es a mal a que yo entra en la oficina. Necesito un certificado medico porque necesito guardar la cama,” el joven habla.

La doctora no comprende y ella le dices muchos preguntas hasta el joven no puede tener su respuesta.

“Doctora, necesito el certificado porque no quiero ir a la escuela hoy. Tengo un examen y no ha estudiado nada.”

La doctora es muy furiosa. Ella se muy enfada y habla,

“¡Va! ¡No puedo mirate mas!”

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[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

bump for ap spanish woot!

 

[bimma85 5,000+ posts]

3 minute bump? cmon holmes

 

[cjjackson85 5,000+ posts]

I'd like to help, but I won't. //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/tongue.gif.6130eb82179565f6db8d26d6001dcd24.gif

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

someone please, just proofread for me.

 

[cjjackson85 5,000+ posts]

You forgot all the accent marks...

You insult me.

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

You forgot all your accent marks...
You insult me.

yes i know that. what else

 

[sumone 10+ year member]

here's help...

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

thats not good enough, but u can get the "gist" of the languange

 

[PhatTonyDeMarco 5,000+ posts]

I speak fluent Spanish, I was **** in Puerto Rico. I read it, and it makes sense but it shows that you arent Spanish, I dont know what kind of teacher you have, but I would give it a B+ for effort.

 

[bigluis 10+ year member]

mmm it sounds ok but u can do better

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

my teacher is spanish //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/crap.gif.7f4dd41e3e9b23fbd170a1ee6f65cecc.gif

what do i need to do to clean it up?

 

[PhatTonyDeMarco 5,000+ posts]

my teacher is spanish //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/crap.gif.7f4dd41e3e9b23fbd170a1ee6f65cecc.gif
what do i need to do to clean it up?

Move to Mexico...?

BTW, I was born in Philly:naughty:

 

[cjjackson85 5,000+ posts]

my teacher is spanish //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/crap.gif.7f4dd41e3e9b23fbd170a1ee6f65cecc.gif
what do i need to do to clean it up?

Start from scratch.

 

[Bigrick31 10+ year member]

****

LOL you said ****:laugh: