My first attmept at audio production. . . looking for feedback. .

[Deadbeat 10+ year member]

Well, ive decided to dabble around in music production. . . here is my first serious attempt at it. . . let me know what you think. .

This is a remix of Green Day, Walking Alone. . I tried to do something that would maybe appeal to people who dont listen to hip hop, but still. . . keep it hip hop. . drop your critisism, be harsh, i really dont mind. . . just keep it constructive. .

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=25317

First One At the top

Walk Alone

Feat: Beige, Hard Target, Enoch

Produced by: PheaTureZ (a.k.a. DeadBeat)

Enjoy. . .

Click to read more...

 

[DBfan187 5,000+ posts]

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[djman37 5,000+ posts]

deadbeat, fix the link and we'll listen.

 

[Deadbeat 10+ year member]

should be working now

 

[djman37 5,000+ posts]

so far, 1 min in, the overlays sound 'inserted'. But it IS interesting.

 

[djman37 5,000+ posts]

pitch it out to stations... KDGE here in Dallas got quite the look for it's Walk Alone/Wonder Wall remix.

 

[Deadbeat 10+ year member]

pitch it out to stations... KDGE here in Dallas got quite the look for it's Walk Alone/Wonder Wall remix.

Will do, i just need to get the production perfected on it. Tough to balance everything so that it sounds well blended no matter what speakers you are hearing it over.

 

[DIPayton 10+ year member]

I listened to the first one... Actually sounds great at parts... I didn't like some of the lyrics but thought it was pretty good tho. Better than I thought it was going to be. I don't know anything about music, but it sounds like a half assed recording...

Overall pretty good tho. I like it. Good lyrics, creative and original stuff... I like the idea of taking a song I would never listen to (Walk Alone) and getting me to listen to it and actually liking it (by adding hip hop style to it).

 

[tRiGgEr 5,000+ posts]

Well done. I enjoyed listening to it. Second guy on the track kind of throws it off but enjoyable to listen to.

 

[Deadbeat 10+ year member]

I listened to the first one... Actually sounds great at parts... I didn't like some of the lyrics but thought it was pretty good tho. Better than I thought it was going to be. I don't know anything about music, but it sounds like a half assed recording...
Overall pretty good tho. I like it. Good lyrics, creative and original stuff... I like the idea of taking a song I would never listen to (Walk Alone) and getting me to listen to it and actually liking it.

lol. . kind of the reaction i was hoping for. Thank you for your time

 

[djman37 5,000+ posts]

I like a GOOD set of headsets for production work. Over the ear, decent sized drivers. A decent $100 set of headphones rivals speakers that cost 10x as much. They also eliminate room coloring, speaker placement problems, etc, and by nature filter out ambient noise.

 

[djman37 5,000+ posts]

p.s. NEEDS MORE COWBELLS!!!

 

[Deadbeat 10+ year member]

I like a GOOD set of headsets for production work. Over the ear, decent sized drivers. A decent $100 set of headphones rivals speakers that cost 10x as much. They also eliminate room coloring, speaker placement problems, etc, and by nature filter out ambient noise.

im working my way up. This production was completely done on a ripped version of cooledit pro 2.0, and my computer speakers (Creative Labs 5.1)

 

[Chevyaudio 5,000+ posts]

sounds good man, definatly throw it to some stations after you finish tweaking it. I used to play around on fruity loops, but .mid files arent fun to work with....though they did sound decently good

 

[DBfan187 5,000+ posts]

p.s. NEEDS MORE COWBELLS!!!

who else has the fever?