new song im working on. .

your breaks of your lyrics should match the breaks of the verse of the musical part of the song. because it doesnt the beat and lyrics dont match up, causing a song that sounds really good lyrically not to sound so good because the music behind it doesnt match the song your rapping over

i hope this helps you out i dont mean to make you feel like you arent a good artist because the lyrics should be heard because they are good, but they should also flow with the music that powers those lyrics

 
oh. . so essentially, your saying my flow is off. . hmm. . i work hard on my flow, i usually get more credit for my flow then i do for my lyrics, but ill definately give it more attention next time around. Thanx for the crit

 
I gotta agree, the beat throws this song off... The beat and lyrics don't flow good. The lyrics are amazing tho, great song. Not all that bad of a flow... just something you might want to work on. It was even good flow towards the end but not consistent. Its even a good beat but not used right for this song.

Overall, still a very good song... The lyrics are tight.

 
I gotta agree, the beat throws this song off... The beat and lyrics don't flow good. The lyrics are amazing tho, great song. Not all that bad of a flow... just something you might want to work on. It was even good flow towards the end but not consistent. Its even a good beat but not used right for this song.
Overall, still a very good song... The lyrics are tight.
k, appreciate the feedback

at least i havent had any tomatoes thrown at me yet lol

 
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