Okay, a local rapper named R.E.D called a diss on me, and this is my reponse.It's called Big Bad Wolf - R.E.D Diss Response
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=102219
Tell me wut ya think.
sup man, First off, im not going to hate. . . I rap as well. And i know it takes courage to post your shit up and have get eaten alive by all the critics that really know nothing about rap and probably cant do much better themselves. . .
But as to your audios, they defineately need help man. .
First off, just because you rap dont mean that you have to act like a gangster. Its all about implementing who you truly are and twisting that around your style. Dont follow the crowd you know. . . Im truly willing to bet that your not out shoving gats in peoples faces nah mean. . .
Second off, for battles. . . punchlines are whats needed. You lack them. Wiork a little on your lyrics dawg. Get your wordplay up, get creative with your metaphors and punchlines. . . this is really what wins battles
Thirdly, something needs to be done about your delivery. You sound very mono-tone, as if you have no emotion at all nah mean. you have to be alot more animated in your voice and you have to make people feel what you are feeling at each line. . . or at least, deliver the lines so that you control the reaction people have
Keep at it. . . my best advice though, kill the thug act and be yourself bro. Hip Hop has nothing to do with proving how gangster you are and shit. Origionality and Creativity is the key. . .
Heres my soundclick page if you ever get a chance to listen. . . alot of incomplete shit on there, couple free styles. . . and some bad quality. . . but none of it is studio cuts, they was made on my home PC so I threw them up on the net just for shits and grins. . .
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=25317
