req
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am a mod.
i think you stole the flash intro from some template, and thats usually a nono in my book.
the site is alright, id like to see more fluid top graphic tho - its kinda just blotched together? and i like to see some graphical buttons too.
the site is alright, id like to see more fluid top graphic tho - its kinda just blotched together? and i like to see some graphical buttons too.
jujumantb
10+ year member
Duke of Earl
Not too bad, that rapper needs to work on his lyrics though, he flows alright, but has nothing to talk about.
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Yeah, I'll drop the flash. I have Dreamweaver, so I am using this site until I finish the actual site in flash.
As for the lyrics. Miami has a different style, but he is fully capible of doing stuff more lyrically. We will never do any poetic backpackish stuff though. Most people down here giggle at that stuff. I have respect for them because of how well the flip lyrics and metaphors, but we'll leave that to the peeps up north and in teh midwest.
We still have ALOT of work and polishing up to do...
As for the lyrics. Miami has a different style, but he is fully capible of doing stuff more lyrically. We will never do any poetic backpackish stuff though. Most people down here giggle at that stuff. I have respect for them because of how well the flip lyrics and metaphors, but we'll leave that to the peeps up north and in teh midwest.
We still have ALOT of work and polishing up to do...
Wonderbread
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Against Avatar Theft
Your spelling sucks.
Right on the front page, just after the intro, not only is that text incredibly hard to read, but you spelled versatile incorrectly.
And seriously, find another way to put that text on that page and the bio page. It's virtually unintelligible.
Right on the front page, just after the intro, not only is that text incredibly hard to read, but you spelled versatile incorrectly.
And seriously, find another way to put that text on that page and the bio page. It's virtually unintelligible.
req
5,000+ posts
am a mod.
also - dreamweaver is FAR from a noob program.
at least all the pages work. *shrug*
just make it look like a professional page, rather than something my little sister put on her myspace lol.
at least all the pages work. *shrug*
just make it look like a professional page, rather than something my little sister put on her myspace lol.
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No, I didn't say Dreamweaver is a noob program. For this site I used a built in website builder, so I was limited with what I can do. I am developing the full site in Dreamweaver and will upload it when I finish.
For what I was working with, the site came out good.
For what I was working with, the site came out good.
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