Bout to submit this rap to a contest..

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Cant wait.

 

[canyouhearmatt 10+ year member]

x2

i needa microphone..hence if i can get with my friend cousin..we can do this shit at a studio

 

[MikeyB 5,000+ posts]

i needa microphone..hence if i can get with my friend cousin..we can do this shit at a studio

Word to yo motha

 

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You even look the part.

Hard y0!!!!11!

 

[chaunb3400 10+ year member]

reads extremely mainstream, but if thats what your going for then you will run into alot of competition since im pretty sure thats what everybody elses rap will look like...Turn it in and hell you may win..Good Luck

 

[MikeyB 5,000+ posts]

You even look the part.
Hard y0!!!!11!

I cant heeearrrrr JOooO000oO!!!!

 

[Fusion_FREAK 10+ year member]

You even look the part.
Hard y0!!!!11!

OMGZ!!!!!!!!!!! Don't cap me bro!

 

[Fusion_FREAK 10+ year member]

OP is a douche rocket.

 

[squeak9798 5,000+ posts]

A local radio station is doing a Put on Freestyle mix. The rap has to about where you live and how you rep it. I have read/heard some of the entries so far, not soo good, they dont flow, and some dont even ryhme. And whoever wins gets moniez. So my black friends said I should rap to this shit and submit it. So this is what I got so far...
1 whole verse that goes into hook..

And the rap has to be 1 minute long, and this is exactly 1 minute with the beat.

i put on for my city

i put up with the grity

and when you reppin 803

then other brothers get no pity

we put on for the trouble

we throw deueces you see double

we roll donks, we roll caprices

we roll caddys, we roll bubbles

sittin on more than 22's

walkin in the freshest shoes

stuntin in the freshest swag

got d-boys with duffle bags

with my city on my fitted

i am strapped i am heated

and just like the concrete

motha-****a will be streeted

we are bloods

we make you bleed

we see red, we see green

in the paper, we are seen

but in the streets, we THE king

we got 9's,45's

not afraid to bust a cap

we bringin sumter on tha map

so motha-****a get back

cuz I PUT ON...HOOK

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Dear god that's horrible.

If you're going to write something, atleast make it realistic and not about some made up fantasy land you live in where you and "da boyz" are street thugs.

 

[Grinder1989 5,000+ posts]

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Dear god that's horrible.

If you're going to write something, atleast make it realistic and not about some made up fantasy land you live in where you and "da boyz" are street thugs.

Everyone with "boyz" thinks they're hard *****. They need their "boyz" because they're too weak on their own.

 

[RAM_Designs 5,000+ posts]

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[Ceezer 10+ year member]

I think we are on top of the list for the most crime according to our population..its crazy in this town for reals now..

3rd by metro, according to the last FBI rankings I saw.

1. Detroit

2. Memphis

3. Sumter

 

[Fusion_FREAK 10+ year member]

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[canyouhearmatt 10+ year member]

reads extremely mainstream, but if thats what your going for then you will run into alot of competition since im pretty sure thats what everybody elses rap will look like...Turn it in and hell you may win..Good Luck

Thanks man.

 

[canyouhearmatt 10+ year member]

Oh and to the fegs who post pictures of me..theres a new one on my PB now where I got kicked in the nuts..caption it?