Bout to submit this rap to a contest..

[canyouhearmatt 10+ year member]

A local radio station is doing a Put on Freestyle mix. The rap has to about where you live and how you rep it. I have read/heard some of the entries so far, not soo good, they dont flow, and some dont even ryhme. And whoever wins gets moniez. So my black friends said I should rap to this shit and submit it. So this is what I got so far...

1 whole verse that goes into hook..

And the rap has to be 1 minute long, and this is exactly 1 minute with the beat.

i put on for my city

i put up with the grity

and when you reppin 803

then other brothers get no pity

we put on for the trouble

we throw deueces you see double

we roll donks, we roll caprices

we roll caddys, we roll bubbles

sittin on more than 22's

walkin in the freshest shoes

stuntin in the freshest swag

got d-boys with duffle bags

with my city on my fitted

i am strapped i am heated

and just like the concrete

motha-****a will be streeted

we are bloods

we make you bleed

we see red, we see green

in the paper, we are seen

but in the streets, we THE king

we got 9's,45's

not afraid to bust a cap

we bringin sumter on tha map

so motha-****a get back

cuz I PUT ON...HOOK

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[Bigpimpin91 10+ year member]

I have read/heard some of the entries so far. A local radio station is doing a Put on Freestyle mix. And whoever wins gets moniez. So my black friends said I should rap to this shit and submit it. So this is what I got so far...
1 whole verse that goes into hook..

i put on for my city

i put up with the grity

and when you reppin 313

then other brothers get no pity

we put on for the trouble

we throw deueces you see double

we roll donks, we roll caddys

we roll caprices, we roll bubbles

sittin on more than 22's

walkin in the freshest shoes

stuntin in the freshest swag

got d-boys with duffle bags

with my city on my fitted

i am strapped i am heated

and just like the concrete

motha-****a will be streeted

we are bloods

we make you bleed

we see red, we see green

in the paper, we are seen

but in the streets, we THE king

we got 9's,45's

not afraid to bust a cap

we bringin Detroit on tha map

so motha-****a get back

cuz I PUT ON...HOOK

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Sounds pretty sweet.

 

[MikeyB 5,000+ posts]

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[bigbangtheory 5,000+ posts]

Dude, that is new hotness right there! Fawk you just have a career ahead of you! Can I get your autograph?

 

[GabeC 10+ year member]

word the 803 is roughest town out there for realz word up

 

[canyouhearmatt 10+ year member]

word the 803 is roughest town out there for realz word up

I think we are on top of the list for the most crime according to our population..its crazy in this town for reals now..

 

[chunky cumz 10+ year member]

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[orangecounty1 10+ year member]

/thread

then /wrists so you cant type anymore BS like this again.

 

[Jameseypoo 5,000+ posts]

idiot

 

[Grinder1989 5,000+ posts]

I think it does not look original. Looks like you sat down and picked stuff out of raps.

 

[canyouhearmatt 10+ year member]

I think it does not look original. Looks like you sat down and picked stuff out of raps.

nope..started writing as soon as me and my homeboys heard the contest on the radio.

 

[stillfly45 10+ year member]

not afraid to bust a cap

was average until there, then it just failed. //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/crap.gif.7f4dd41e3e9b23fbd170a1ee6f65cecc.gif

 

[Gearstix 10+ year member]

I like it.

 

[bigbangtheory 5,000+ posts]

Sounds like majority of the rap crap out today. I will probably be a huge hit with the kiddies.............as long as it has a tight beat yo!

 

[RAM_Designs 5,000+ posts]

It's official now, you're the biggest douchebag on the forum.

Congrats.