Any artists bored?

Hope you don't mind a critique from a guy who's done this for 27 years.
I love the graffiti font, it's big enough and bold enough.

The banners look too sharp, almost square edged. Soften them up, make it flow!

And I agree on the lettering, that'll be real hard to read on skin. Try a traditional tattoo font, like the one called "tattoo ink" on this page:

http://www.acidfonts.com/tfonts2.htm

Appreciate the comments, And opperitunity. Id love to see it in ink, but drawing it up is pleasure enough.

I agree on the banner's, And they DID start out squared. Ill try to rework them a bit, However keep in mine i did this in ~5 minutes total time.

Id post some of my other work, But i dont want anyone taking my idea's.. //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/smile.gif.1ebc41e1811405b213edfc4622c41e27.gif

 
Ill probably get on this a bit later tonight. Girls been taking up my spare time, But i WILL get it done. If you could get a better picture of the union deal, id appreciate it. Or even a "Keyword" to search for on google images so maybe i have a few to look at..?

 
cool cool. not in a big rush or ne thing like that. I do have some ideas tho. After showing some friends and family the drawing and getting some feedback i was thinking maybe ditch the rest in peace part with that trim stuff around the outside all together and put the date he passed away under the jb. i like the cleanliness of it and that might finish it off perfectly. I cant remeber the date of his passing off hand but let me know what you think of that idea. i will get the date for you.

 
cool cool. not in a big rush or ne thing like that. I do have some ideas tho. After showing some friends and family the drawing and getting some feedback i was thinking maybe ditch the rest in peace part with that trim stuff around the outside all together and put the date he passed away under the jb. i like the cleanliness of it and that might finish it off perfectly. I cant remeber the date of his passing off hand but let me know what you think of that idea. i will get the date for you.
The whole "circle" idea came from the circle with the flames on top in your sig pic. Would something like that be more fitting, Then the DOB / DOD under it? Up to you man. I got plenty of time on my hand's, And any tattoo artist is gonna tweak it a bit anyways. Just let me know what you want / need. Its been my hobby for the past 15 years.

 
The whole "circle" idea came from the circle with the flames on top in your sig pic. Would something like that be more fitting, Then the DOB / DOD under it? Up to you man. I got plenty of time on my hand's, And any tattoo artist is gonna tweak it a bit anyways. Just let me know what you want / need. Its been my hobby for the past 15 years.

OOOK after a lot of thought and trying to make the tattoo for me as much as for my uncle i like the idea of just having the jb you have with rip in the same style lettering under it... i cant decide if i would want to keep the circle or not... but as my uncle would say it.. keep it simple haha. if your not interested in doing it ne more no problem i havent gotten back to you in a while

 
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