World Peace in a Paragraph

Another version of life lived, a different set of means

Another way of thinking, a different kind of me.

A brand new religion, one that has never been rehearsed

But its cursed, and this curse could mean the end of this earth.

So many people worry about the troubles that they got at hand

To many simple solutions just destroying the land

And when its all said and done,

And were gonna tell our kids that we did the best we could,

But we know that we didnt.

Its gettin crazy, summers hot when its freezin.

Hurricanes getting stronger tearin up the southern regions.

Big fires taking lifes, Yo its pure destruction.

Were at a fork in the road, time to choose the right junction.

Before theirs nothing left,

We need to stop this regression.

Get all the leaders of the world together in a session.

Only then is there a shot that our kids' kids would thrive in a world that is growin, i just wanna survive.

 
Nicely written. Although the concept too idealistic.

I find the lack of grammar precluding the piece from something that could be labeled as "nicely written."

Unless it is supposed to be some type of a rap or something...then I usually get lost with the word "Yo!", as I am unsure what exactly what means.

 
actually, it's a song. i could type them out myself and properly spell everything, etc, but i got it from a lyrics website.

first, freedom isn't legal. it hasnt been since the writing of the constitution. it hasn't been free since the start of what most call "civilized" society.

second, if we sat all the world leaders down, gave each a huge bong toke... i'm sure we could all come to some sort of compromise and find world peace - within 2 hours. //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/biggrin.gif.d71a5d36fcbab170f2364c9f2e3946cb.gif

yes it's idealistic, but think of it this way...everything that IS, started as an idea..

 
I find the lack of grammar precluding the piece from something that could be labeled as "nicely written."
Unless it is supposed to be some type of a rap or something...then I usually get lost with the word "Yo!", as I am unsure what exactly what means.
I meant as a form of poetry or song. Sorry I forgot you are all uptight flip //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/wink.gif.608e3ea05f1a9f98611af0861652f8fb.gif

 
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