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does this make sense? Someone in a peer review said it doesnt..and i think they just went smart enough to recognize that base was an adjective instead of a verb. Should i bother rewording it?

People whose identities are cloaked with ambiguity often display vulgar and base traits either unconcerned with the reaction of others or actively seeking negative

feedback.

is this better?

People whose identities are cloaked with ambiguity often display vulgar and base traits; they are either unconcerned with the reaction of others or actively seek negative feedback.

 
does this make sense? Someone in a peer review said it doesnt..and i think they just went smart enough to recognize that base was an adjective instead of a verb. Should i bother rewording it?
People whose identities are cloaked with ambiguity often display vulgar and base traits either unconcerned with the reaction of others or actively seeking negative feedback.
Is this guy serious...

 
does this make sense? Someone in a peer review said it doesnt..and i think they just went smart enough to recognize that base was an adjective instead of a verb. Should i bother rewording it?
People whose identities are cloaked with ambiguity often display vulgar and base traits either unconcerned with the reaction of others or actively seeking negative feedback.

the problem with the sentence

http://cgi.ebay.com/ws/eBayISAPI.dll?ViewItem&item=5671269976&rd=1&sspagename=STRK%3AMESE%3AIT&rd=1

is actually here: People whose identities are cloaked with ambiguity often display vulgar and base traits either unconcerned with the reaction of others or that actively seek negative feedback.

that's how it should read.

 
the problem with the sentencehttp://cgi.ebay.com/ws/eBayISAPI.dll?ViewItem&item=5671269976&rd=1&sspagename=STRK%3AMESE%3AIT&rd=1

is actually here: People whose identities are cloaked with ambiguity often display vulgar and base traits either unconcerned with the reaction of others or that actively seek negative feedback.

that's how it should read.

your right..i just caught that...grammar > me....but not joo.. //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/crap.gif.7f4dd41e3e9b23fbd170a1ee6f65cecc.gif

 
i dont think i need the 'that' just drop the ING though..

People whose identities are cloaked with ambiguity often display vulgar and base traits; they are either unconcerned with the reaction of others or actively seek negative feedback.

 
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