MikeofTulsa
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Aj, i'd change the following sentences
God stuck it to him. Through all the wordy flattery and long speeches, and by saying 90% truth, 10% lie, Elihu tried to trick Job, but Job proved yet again that he was faithful and truthful.
To
Job managed to prove God right even with Elihu's attempt to trick him with the wordy and long speeches spoken in truth mixed with some deceit
or something to that effect
might look up a couple synonyms to replace the word trick and deceit
God stuck it to him. Through all the wordy flattery and long speeches, and by saying 90% truth, 10% lie, Elihu tried to trick Job, but Job proved yet again that he was faithful and truthful.
To
Job managed to prove God right even with Elihu's attempt to trick him with the wordy and long speeches spoken in truth mixed with some deceit
or something to that effect
might look up a couple synonyms to replace the word trick and deceit
