st8 spittin

[Gauntlet 5,000+ posts]

No more battling. I'd like to see some rhymes that are actually good. For example

The strongest grip on reality will exist in the clutch of imagery

So goals and dreams should be high with a slight touch of symmetry

Let disruptive divinity be key until a piece of the soul deceases

Away into a mirror universe where peace as a whole decreases

And full increases of wisdom must be injected to rulers in vain

Admonish the anonymous till they're respected and blue in the face

As the truest gauge of strength is ascending unsurmounted steps

Resulting in little literal progress as truth is found in jest

So surrounded by death and violence, silence is aural pleasure

Now to cope with problems ******* becomes a normal measure

But the stormy weather flooded away all the pathways to take

And now vampires even agree to meet halfway with the stake

I gasp at the hate that brandishly branded us with deformities

So war is shooting the cannons abandoned in famines of authorty

Now i'm stranded in conformity, but i'm really not a fan of fear

I'd rather be pumping lead into the foreheads of my granite peers

But the man in the mirror is no longer me, my face has foiled me

Thus this urn makes me yearn for the slightest taste of loyalty

As the snakes in royalty conspire with liars for hideous schemes

And the underworld of anarchy is blind to the oblivious kings

Hence living to dream results with your mind being torn from sanity

So dream to live because the truth of reality is born in fantasy

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

it was okay...

 

[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

i have heard this before,not 100% where tho.ill be back later to write anotehr verse,i gotta go install a system right now.

i actually used that line in a verse i wrote about 4-5 pages back...that might be why it seems familiar :thumbsup

 

[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

No more battling. I'd like to see some rhymes that are actually good. For example
The strongest grip on reality will exist in the clutch of imagery

So goals and dreams should be high with a slight touch of symmetry

Let disruptive divinity be key until a piece of the soul deceases

Away into a mirror universe where peace as a whole decreases

And full increases of wisdom must be injected to rulers in vain

Admonish the anonymous till they're respected and blue in the face

As the truest gauge of strength is ascending unsurmounted steps

Resulting in little literal progress as truth is found in jest

So surrounded by death and violence, silence is aural pleasure

Now to cope with problems ******* becomes a normal measure

But the stormy weather flooded away all the pathways to take

And now vampires even agree to meet halfway with the stake

I gasp at the hate that brandishly branded us with deformities

So war is shooting the cannons abandoned in famines of authorty

Now i'm stranded in conformity, but i'm really not a fan of fear

I'd rather be pumping lead into the foreheads of my granite peers

But the man in the mirror is no longer me, my face has foiled me

Thus this urn makes me yearn for the slightest taste of loyalty

As the snakes in royalty conspire with liars for hideous schemes

And the underworld of anarchy is blind to the oblivious kings

Hence living to dream results with your mind being torn from sanity

So dream to live because the truth of reality is born in fantasy

wow......nuff said

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

i have to bring up the topic and never forget it

theres people out there who thing you're a target

they wanna bring you down and make u swear it

that you won't return to the town so that u can cherish

the fact that you're weak and they're strong

its going on on for so long

omg this sucks. no joke, unless im thinkin about it, i can't rhyme

 

[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

bombarded by the pressures, that are put upon me daily

being the middleman, its hard on me but mainly

it eats away, all my thoughts, no time to settle down

my mind is goin crazy, and it shows the way i frown

i'm down and out of breath, hide this and hide that

they say its all over, but i know its not the last

i try to keep it low, but it gets bottled up inside

i rap it out here, jus to hope that i will find

an answer, to these these trials and tribulations

my life is not bad, as u can tell by other nations

but sometimes, u feel like, you're at your lowest low

but people don't realize, cuz i never let it show

my flow, helps me get it out, all of my anger

if i didnt cut it loose, my life would probly be in danger

i'm a stranger, to myself some of the times when i'm thinkin

i could forget, but it'd require some heavy drinkin

i dont know how, how to end what i'm rappin

its like my thoughts, they jus keep hapnin and hapnin...

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

i pull away from you like in the pole position

we will cut you up like in god's kitchen

people need to forget they live lives

its a simple thing to just live strives

and not achieve anything which happens so often

people taking lives and sometimes brethren

they can't handle emotions like riding a busa

i speed past them but im not gonna lose ya

i want to teach you the quest for right from wrong

simple words of wisdom dont come from so long

ago in the history and the travels of the like

shootin up people and sayin u might

like it when you see them burn to death

fall on their own sword which should be in your breast

take account and take responsibility

for the mistakes you make which might be silly

sometimes life threatening or just plain proposterous

you wont recognize me now, call me annoynomous

cause im on top of this like white on rice

latinos and blacks livin the life

all races together, call it a bazaar

from the melting pot of religions we didn't wary far

ill add u up and subtract them later

cuttin u up like a denominator

now listen up children cause im puttin it together

this lesson is something.......that you...must...weather........

 

[Gauntlet 5,000+ posts]

If these walls could talk I'd listen to the floor

Cause where you stand is too much wisdom to ignore

Lift your fist up through the glass ceiling to feel secure

People in glass houses; throw stones at your realtor!

If the glass if half full, stop overanalyzing

Just fill it back up and stop with the fantasizing

If a tree falls in a forest and there's no one there to hear it

I'm just glad that I was nowhere near it

If your friends jumped off a bridge, they're probably white people

Videotape it cause of the fortune it might equal

Men are from Mars and women make me want to drink this

Cause in Venus, they lack a good penis to think with

Nice guys always finish horny with female friends

Living out their fantasies when the e-mail's sent

It takes two to tango and one to press play

Moving in the rhythm, it's done best this way

Y'all keep pulling my chain when it's never been pushed

Walks and talks like a duck, must be President Bush

Ignorance is bliss till you're blue in the face

Caught red handed cause it isn't true in this case

Money, the evil of all roots that won't grow on trees

The grass is always greener until you blow your leaves

What a tangled web we weave when we conspire to believe

Belief is false certainty moving the desire to achieve

Nothing is a sure thing but death and ************

Truth varies in each eye, so what is imagination?

Education is important for more than employment

Sometimes ya gotta join the system in order to destroy it

If you make the bed, you have to lie to get out of it

If it takes your breath, don't die for a counterfeit

All that glitters ain't gold and all that shivers ain't cold

Age is just a number until it withers and folds

Dodging an obstacle may cause a blow from another

So look both ways before crossing the road to discover

Image is everything even when it isn't

Only when you scream do I pretend to listen

Anger takes half the craft that laughter needs

And I'm sick and tired of all this lack of sleep

Sleep is the cousin of death; but his breath is dying

An inbred subconscious with no tears left for crying

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

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[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

****...gauntlet's got skills...to me his are way above everyone elses

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

hey everyone i can see the facts

its plain that u dont cause u got cataracts

ill lock u inside like a chinese finger toy

makin please

OMG i ****

 

[97JeepTJ 10+ year member]

****...gauntlet's got skills...to me his are way above everyone elses

hands down ... cant beat him :readytogo

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[Gauntlet 5,000+ posts]

Some storytelling...

I'm back from the dead, after years of weaponry warfare

Once thought of the renaissance, but senselessy go nowhere

This despair is disappointing, i'm too fatigued from the journey

But I must stand up and run bleeding, from the gurney

Once lost wandering in echoes, but revived by resurrection

Despots on the throne, time to apply the insurrection

Corrupt feudal systems, trying to control the economy

Selfish men become hellbent, here's a full-on lobotomy

Men with two faces rule, snakes slither through royalty

As King's hire deception as the baby-sitter for loyalty

Women live with witchcraft, getting ***** by fathers

As the home slowly erodes to a place for slaughter

Children stuck in classes, where lies are a mask for death

A brainwashed society, looks like i'm the last one left

I'm not gonna stand for it, time to disrupt the tyranny

Poised for battle, sword in hand - an influx of those fearin me

Storm up to the castle, the revolution is within my grasp

Blood on the palms, dead bodies around - I grin and laugh

Drop the drawbridge, draw the dagger, then head for the King

Slice and dice the guards, they slowly bled from the seams

It's an unsettling scene, but this war is a must for survival

Fight through the night, slaying until the dusk's arrival

The sun awakes from slumber, making the crimson glisten

Time to overthrow the ruler, rebuild from within the system

Take the throne, establish laws, make the pheasants equal

Restore courage to cowards, give 'em a humble sense of ego

Peace was restored to the land, propserity is inevitable

Dead are the dictators with the dexterity of a vegetable

Now I sit atop the throne, with pride in what was done

The future's full of life, and the past has passed with the sun

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

i am illogically and mystically

revealing the world as it appears to me

there's some things that i will never see

unless i am awake in my darkest dreams

you might consider it an anomaly

when you're on a buoy in the middle of the sea

nothin around but piles of seaweed

and kelp holding onto ur chest and not lettin u breathe

when i reach to the top and call it the summit

people grab my feet determined to make me plummet

im consuming so much air u call me a glutton

for survival i am, it cant beat nothin

when i try to hold on, my fingers slip

paramedics arrive but my heart's just a blip

on the EEG and then i flat line

doesnt happen all the time, just some....times....in my rhymes

 

[gellis4 10+ year member]

workin all day and breakin my back

the pain and suffering, puttin up with bosses flack

ready to walk on this mother****er

can't put up with his shit any longer, sittin on his *** not doin jack

sendin me out in this cold dark day, he's sittin inside smokin stogies like crack

i swear it's his face that i'm going to smack.

I got a temper like a volcano, push me too hard you'll realize your mistake

the lava starts flowin there's no stoppin the attack.

this shit's gotten me in too much trouble before,

losin my temper breakin like a chandelier when that shit hits the floor.

gotta get this shit checked out, but i can't afford no doc

i'm lucky to even be able to look @ a clock.

if it wasn't for my mother my life would be wrecked

she held me and the family together with nothin more than love

i'm still workin for her, she doesn't need to catch me with her overburdened glove..