st8 spittin

[bass maniak 10+ year member]

you're rhymes ****in ****, aint got no mutha****in rythymmy rhymes rule the land, put em up and go and get em

yea the sign'll say SOLD cuz i stole your record deal

my rhymes will put u in your seat, you'll no that i'm for real

u like to quote fifty, even though you're be-low par

first u need some flow, before u ever will go far

so put the mic down ,and, forgot about your rhymes

u cant stay up on stage when u've got no flow of time

maybe its jus me, but i bet the rest agree

u need to pack yo bags, cuz you're defeated easily

and dont come back, cuz I dont want to see your face

u've lost too many times, u just placed last in the race

jus lost the race? when i overlapped your ***

your wack rymes are holding u back at a slow pace

you neva had shit from the start,tahts why your bearings cant be replaced

you will still be at the start when im at 100 feet still peelin

on the real man,your styles the one im not feeling

in a battle...........your the fish and im reelin

yea the sign'll say SOLD cuz i stole your record deal?

whats that mean? my styles bout to get bit?cause u cant write your own shit?

your style is a joke and yo this aint no comedy club

so u get no respect from me cause my rymes are injected into the eardrum clearly

am i done not nearlly,your the kinda guy thats rymes say bear wit me

cause im not that great,lil youngin steppin up to the plate

about to get knocked back through the gate of wack mc's

and guess what? thats the land where your rymes are ruling

you jus a young buck.......give this guy some time,maybe he'll clue in

or maybe not........you need to think of what your doing and the skills ya got

3 hours later.................................................................he's still thinking

buddy you gotta make it through the lil leage before tryng to step in teh ring

with me cause 20 seconds later..........................ding ding

cause the skill's i talk about i got alot

talking im low par? well if the game is golf

no shit u dont wanna see my face...

cause i make amatuers like u look like a disgrace

and no i cant stay on stage,i have anotehr show i gotta hit up today

so im easily defeated?

funny how u can try to decieve

but you'll have an easier time getting charles manson released

next time you wanna diss n hate

intigrate your rymes with some skill's

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

i walk down these streets cold and dreary

i look up to the sky and see no one can hear me

steppin on the cracks in the concrete

noises so discreet from the streets of redemption

teachin young minds to stay for the lesson

day in and day out we roll alone

rule these streets like al capone

mindless people no expressions on their faces

travelin in and out, jumpin different places

keepin their feet outta the fire

with no desire to retire the the old ways of preachin

that we need to step up and greet them

as they step through the door of beginners

everyone first has to become a sinner

by writing disgraceful rhymes that dont flow in time

with the beat and the lines remind me of a kind

of person who discussed the matter

of pickin the latter

in the situations of subjects

and the matter of prospects

about the future of these lines

some call them weak, and maybe ur wrong

when u writin your songs talkin about

killin people and bling in ur face

if u writin about that this aint the place

and u cant keep up with the pace

of an accomplished lyricist

these flow so quick its like they just vanished

from right under your nose

in the game not just anything goes

rarely screened until we often ream

the harvest of pity of the flows so many

we come across each day that are just out there to say

im here to make money, and to give it away

but i come out on the stage

and i dont care about the wage

rappin is what i do for my life

the rhymes are the blood

the beats the flesh

take out these

and what you got left?

a piece of oily skin

not recognizeable by even ur kin

pack ur bags cause you movin on down

in this day and age only one rapper can own this town....

 

[bass maniak 10+ year member]

was that rap towards me?

or the last 2 lines

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

nope. i just like rappin to relesae thoughts and energy. in my room, i have about 6 journals. but theyre only rhymes

 

[bass maniak 10+ year member]

ahh ic,cool man

 

[bass maniak 10+ year member]

you got msn man?

if you do you should hit me up

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

nope. get on AIM. just im me even though i have an away up.

 

[bass maniak 10+ year member]

sorry man i dont have aim here lol

im at my cuz's house and he only gots msn.

but when i get back home ill hit u up,like tuesday ish

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

k sounds good

 

[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

jus lost the race? when i overlapped your assyour wack rymes are holding u back at a slow pace

you neva had shit from the start,tahts why your bearings cant be replaced

you will still be at the start when im at 100 feet still peelin

on the real man,your styles the one im not feeling

in a battle...........your the fish and im reelin

yea the sign'll say SOLD cuz i stole your record deal?

whats that mean? my styles bout to get bit?cause u cant write your own shit?

your style is a joke and yo this aint no comedy club

so u get no respect from me cause my rymes are injected into the eardrum clearly

am i done not nearlly,your the kinda guy thats rymes say bear wit me

cause im not that great,lil youngin steppin up to the plate

about to get knocked back through the gate of wack mc's

and guess what? thats the land where your rymes are ruling

you jus a young buck.......give this guy some time,maybe he'll clue in

or maybe not........you need to think of what your doing and the skills ya got

3 hours later.................................................................he's still thinking

buddy you gotta make it through the lil leage before tryng to step in teh ring

with me cause 20 seconds later..........................ding ding

cause the skill's i talk about i got alot

talking im low par? well if the game is golf

no shit u dont wanna see my face...

cause i make amatuers like u look like a disgrace

and no i cant stay on stage,i have anotehr show i gotta hit up today

so im easily defeated?

funny how u can try to decieve

but you'll have an easier time getting charles manson released

next time you wanna diss n hate

intigrate your rymes with some skill's

i hope ya got backup, get yo bags and pack up

i'm bout to hit the stage, and its time for me to rack up

lack of.....skill, you need some practice

rhymes so water-logged, i guess i'll call u "cactus"

u cant match this, u cant touch this

get the **** out, your rhymes need some substance

u talk about me, using part of your "rhyme"

i only did it once, u did it ****in three times

its a crime and a crying shame

how your rhymes could be ,so mutha ****in lame

so the next time u want to rap, versus me

i take u out and beat you down personally

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

i rhymes so dry, i guess i'll call u "cactus"

that had to be the worst metaphor ever. pj, whats inside a cactus that is vital for survival in the desert?

 

[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

better now????.......smart ***...j/k

 

[Acidburn 5,000+ posts]

that does ****, cactuses are FULL of water, cut open a prickly pear and water will come out

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

you may call this thread st8 spittin

but y'all need to stop spittin and start listenin

to the sermon im preachin and sunday school teachin

to young guns in the rap game

no two rhmyes are never the same

lesson two is how to recognize fakers

weed them out callin them rakers

make sure u get each and every

ok this sucks so bad, it doesn't need to be talked about. im done rhyming for tonight. unless im thinkin about somethin, it just doesnnt flow as shown by ^^

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

that does ****, cactuses are FULL of water, cut open a prickly pear and water will come out

lol i was like, they have water in them... but he changed it now.