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I'm gettin' sick of everything, my life is going down

What to do about this girl, she acts like a clown

But I love her to death, till that do us part

Wish I could go again, I need a new start

Who wants to mess with a tainted man like me?

I've seen the end of the world, I just jumped with glee

I can end this boredom of life so quickly,

But I won't die so valiantly

This rap isn't mean for anyone this time

Just me, I need to release what's on my mind

So full of ****s, so full of leeches

This world filled with envy, even I can conceive this

A day to forget everything would do time justice

I want to forget everything that has any substance

Working hard to get nowhere, nothing I want

While rich mother****ers have everything, and only to flaunt

I have integrity but what does that do

It makes me feel even more distraught, my verbal load times two

My rhymes are meant to bother people so callous, it's malice

Why take the time out to drink out of their chalice?

 
I'm gettin' sick of everything, my life is going downWhat to do about this girl, she acts like a clown

But I love her to death, till that do us part

Wish I could go again, I need a new start

Who wants to mess with a tainted man like me?

I've seen the end of the world, I just jumped with glee

I can end this boredom of life so quickly,

But I won't die so valiantly

This rap isn't mean for anyone this time

Just me, I need to release what's on my mind

So full of ****s, so full of leeches

This world filled with envy, even I can conceive this

A day to forget everything would do time justice

I want to forget everything that has any substance

Working hard to get nowhere, nothing I want

While rich mother****ers have everything, and only to flaunt

I have integrity but what does that do

It makes me feel even more distraught, my verbal load times two

My rhymes are meant to bother people so callous, it's malice

Why take the time out to drink out of their chalice?


Join the club man, your not the only one

your life is goin down? Im at the bottom lookin glum

feels like theres no sun, no light for me to grasp

they say the futures better, but the present i cant get past

its like im the last person in this race of life

Every step forward is met with another reason to lift the knife

but im done with that route, pain used to be the way to go

but all it shows is a scar that i gotta live with till im old

its not the way to be bold, its a way to stay cold

a way to drown in your own misery, your soul becomes sold

and with no hold on what seems the last thread

you'll fall faster and faster and just wish you were dead

jsut look at what you said and what you wrote down in this thread

you've found an outlet for all that pain jumbled up in your head

work harder and achieve more because integrity puts you in the lead

so what they got riches, you've got the power to be free

money's like a prison, like a lock with no key

once you get taken, your world becomes diseased.

Ya its nice to have money ... but look at all the f*ckin sell outs in this world ...

Cheer up bro, sh*t gets better ... Keep writin cuz i know it helps

 
Today's a new day like all of the rest

I've gotta get up, get out, and put on my vest

I've been a victim of deception, there's no exceptions

It's like I'm living a lie, with evil receptions

Been used so much that I'm numb inside

Just dig me a hole now, someplace to hide

Where no one will find me, bury me aside

Jab that knife in my side again, reopen the scar

My life is so disjointed, my soul is afar

I only rhyme about my past, leave the rest for last

Maybe tomorrow will be better, set my mind amast.

 
Today's a new day like all of the restI've gotta get up, get out, and put on my vest

I've been a victim of deception, there's no exceptions

It's like I'm living a lie, with evil receptions

Been used so much that I'm numb inside

Just dig me a hole now, someplace to hide

Where no one will find me, bury me aside

Jab that knife in my side again, reopen the scar

My life is so disjointed, my soul is afar

I only rhyme about my past, leave the rest for last

Maybe tomorrow will be better, set my mind amast.
DANG! that was hot!

 
hatin dat playa goin back to the no way

bein like mj, 12 yr old r his forte

morgan wit his flows impressin the rest

but this run so hot its like u lit it with meth

we runnin the cuts and the tracks on the way

i dont know how to say this but it won't be ok

ive had enough of this

respect yo hertage, give u granny a kiss

when i see these new guns

its always a bad scene

had no one to teach them

they was far from serene

their rhymes is so grimey they goin down the grate

when i told 'em bout dis, all they got was irate

playas need a teacher to let em know

in dis game theres only one word, flow

 
Today's a new day like all of the restI've gotta get up, get out, and put on my vest

I've been a victim of deception, there's no exceptions

It's like I'm living a lie, with evil receptions

Been used so much that I'm numb inside

Just dig me a hole now, someplace to hide

Where no one will find me, bury me aside

Jab that knife in my side again, reopen the scar

My life is so disjointed, my soul is afar

I only rhyme about my past, leave the rest for last

Maybe tomorrow will be better, set my mind amast.
The new day you speak of repeats the day preceeding

i know this because i awaken to my mind bleeding

its amazing how my mind becomes the same victim of deception

i only wish my mood would have a re-election

a little change of pace, a cage to keep the last bit of happiness safe

but i guess its too late, with all the medications i still feel numb

parents nothing but an instigation to make me feel more dumb

this feeling only aware to some, theres no one to relate to

no one to relieve me of the hate i feel for you

and what i speak is true so dont take this for granted

my feet are slipping beneath me, they need to be firmly planted

the ground seems slanted and leading to a bottomless pit

one last flicker from the candle, my life becomes unlit.

 
lemans ... tip ...

make it a little more poetic ... the grammer u use looks like shit when its written down. Maybe if you had a nice nelly bea tbehind it and were rappin on TV id understand, but when freestyling on paper, lose the shit grammer ... lol

^^^ dont take that the wrong way :readytogo

 
lemans ... tip ...
make it a little more poetic ... the grammer u use looks like shit when its written down. Maybe if you had a nice nelly bea tbehind it and were rappin on TV id understand, but when freestyling on paper, lose the shit grammer ... lol

^^^ dont take that the wrong way :readytogo
lol i know man. i was tired and didn't feel like writing it out. but yeah, i need more poetic lines.

 
what is it thats in this paint that makes it fall on my head

the bits and cracks must be filled with the lead

from the beginning of rap, no way to go back

flowin these lines like going through a pipeline

being blown up by iraqis

they dont wan't us back you see?

politicians around trying to scuffle to make peace

might as well put bush on a leash

make him perform

causin people to lose jobs, lets reform

my cousin's out of work, but i cant lay in on dc

can't say nothin, im 15 but still angry

i heard abotu the trials and the lies of the F911

michael moore should stop, wait hes already done

splittin and mixin the facts

makin u see the truth like it seems u got cataracts

blocking ur vision of the world

young blacks have never been told

the ways that they grew up

and threw up on their 16 yr old mothers

fathers leavin scared tryin to hit up another

movin across towns tryin to get one minute lovers

i hate it when i see young singles with kids

not that its bad for them or somethin wrong

its just the beginning of a story, something long

i remember the time i was in my old kitchen

watching my mother make cake with white icing glistenin

asked her "mommy where do kids come from"

and she didnt say, an egg and ***

but she told me up front, bein a doctor

love her to death, no more than my father

taught me about the world

whats wrong and whats right

put me to bed 24/7

in day and every night

now ill bring up my sista

always been there

now i miss her

but she'll be back home in a week

make my parents stop the weeps

that they was flowin out

just like these rhymes with a doubt

that i'll be the youngest in the home still

but ill rise the status with my will

to become the best of the rest

dont follow, its only a test

wanna close it up now

dont need to, but if u want, you can just say....."wow"

 
never did see them happy together

thier love just fell,slow, like a feather

now there's hate, no love to be seen

now i see the grass, the grass so green

it grows no matter the conditions

no hate, no love, no tensions

sometimes i wonder why these things happen

but i let it all out when i'm rappin

yea its bad havin 2 homes, when they're thirty miles apart

where did the love go, what happened to their heart

i'm jus writin down what i'm feelin at the moment

everything feels so wrong, so broken

 
The new day you speak of repeats the day preceedingi know this because i awaken to my mind bleeding

its amazing how my mind becomes the same victim of deception

i only wish my mood would have a re-election

a little change of pace, a cage to keep the last bit of happiness safe

but i guess its too late, with all the medications i still feel numb

parents nothing but an instigation to make me feel more dumb

this feeling only aware to some, theres no one to relate to

no one to relieve me of the hate i feel for you

and what i speak is true so dont take this for granted

my feet are slipping beneath me, they need to be firmly planted

the ground seems slanted and leading to a bottomless pit

one last flicker from the candle, my life becomes unlit.
Don't worry about your parents jeep,

You'll find them to be the least of your problems in a couple years...

 
never did see them happy togetherthier love just fell,slow, like a feather

now there's hate, no love to be seen

now i see the grass, the grass so green

it grows no matter the conditions

no hate, no love, no tensions

sometimes i wonder why these things happen

but i let it all out when i'm rappin

yea its bad havin 2 homes, when they're thirty miles apart

where did the love go, what happened to their heart

i'm jus writin down what i'm feelin at the moment

everything feels so wrong, so broken
mmm sorry to hear that man

 
My mind is so sarcastic my thoughts seem elastic

Time for a new day, this one has become jurassic

Who wants to test the patience of someone like me

It's been another rough day and I'm as sweet as a Spree

Started out a winner, I woke up only to find

A flat tire in the driveway, but I don't mind

I only had it fixed yesterday, WTF is the problem

Only later to find, there's another hole in the bottom

Look it's 6:30, time to go to work....

Put your vest on Jon, and wipe off that smirk

It's time to help all the wonderful people who need a new floor

But today they were vile, and becoming a bore

What? Someone needs 2600 pounds of ceramic tile?

Roger, I'm on it and watch me put on a smile

"I'd love to strain my back getting your tile ma'am"

I'll even further the strain by loading it in your van

But enough complaints, the day is half done

I can enjoy the rest now.... lay back and have fun.

 
My mind is so sarcastic my thoughts seem elasticTime for a new day, this one has become jurassic

Who wants to test the patience of someone like me

It's been another rough day and I'm as sweet as a Spree

Started out a winner, I woke up only to find

A flat tire in the driveway, but I don't mind

I only had it fixed yesterday, WTF is the problem

Only later to find, there's another hole in the bottom

Look it's 6:30, time to go to work....

Put your vest on Jon, and wipe off that smirk

It's time to help all the wonderful people who need a new floor

But today they were vile, and becoming a bore

What? Someone needs 2600 pounds of ceramic tile?

Roger, I'm on it and watch me put on a smile

"I'd love to strain my back getting your tile ma'am"

I'll even further the strain by loading it in your van

But enough complaints, the day is half done

I can enjoy the rest now.... lay back and have fun.
lol i take it u had a bad day. evaluate my flow. tell me whatcha think

 
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