Originally posted by quiimari My only criticism... Limit learn to flow a lil.' you can't have a 2 word line followed by 30 syllables with a rhyme, but then again you modeled that one after Jay-Z, so you were already starting with a lyrical *****.
do u mean like this?
even though i been doin it since October
i seem to keep on repeatin myself so u think i'm done and its ova
but then u can't help to sign on everyday to see what this cat will say next
will warren write like dis or will warren write his best
of course when u flow everday on the forum ya shyt do seem to get a lil' old
i first talked about ho's then moved to pros, E designs - next - who's knows
so then i got folks tellin me how to correct my flow
how bout u bend over and let ya boy audio noob stick it so u feel it in ur throat
i didn't do dis to get your opinions or have folks hate
i simply made this thread so folks can show some kidna talent and have other retaliate
but then why hesitate
you come at me sayin i aint great
i haven't seen u write anything, so go back and take notes of what i said on the 5th day
then maybe i'll be listened to
but like i said i'm gonna continue to rap the same way as i did before
i got ho's givin me props while the fellas walkin out the door
but who woulda known
that a young cat in college - is about to spit a degree of knowledge
don't be mad b/c i flowed to a beat jay -z was on
he's now the king of the game w/over 10million sold
before u ever come at me sayin i should change my shyt up
just remember u're the one that bent over and let audionoob stick ya in da butt!