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marleyskater420
5,000+ posts
Banned
Me?
I read one or two of his lines and didn't bother to read the rest. Its the same"ive got rims, ive got money, you dont" stuff. He used ryhme,lyrics, and flow an assload, and didnt really talk about anything significant, just random cookie-cutter words that made some resemblance of a line. I know I ****, but I definately feel my ryhme was superior to his last 3.
Gauntlet....now Gauntlet has skill..... Limit...needs to expand a bit more...
I know I ****, so thats besides the point.
I spit these epic poetic, nonconcentric rhymes with ease, are these stolen? Please…
Take over now, grab these beats
These lyrics flow with east that’s hard to mistreat
From the uptown sound to the downtown lyrics
The words that come forth aren’t afraid to touch it
These cunning abilities that stem forth from within
Snatch you out from the cold and bring you in
These words I speak come straight and true,
try to grab them and it’s the end for you
Typing hastily at the computer screen I stare at the abyss
What we’ve seen and what we’ve missed
The eternal rap sheets that have emerged from the confounded pounds that surge
The words that have shaped our society, the feelings that break forth entirely
Theres no denying the talent that lies within this rhyme scheme
Call it what you will, but be careful to those hatred you may deem
Out from the silent night these words offer what others may fight
I’m the babbletronic, symphonic lender who isn’t afraid to try those that pretend
Holding those accountable for their actions to whom evil gets lent
These hate makers, rap fakers, word shakers need to be put in place
Taking what was once sacred and creating overwhelming disgrace
Bandpass? I don't get it.
Rap? Wrap? or merely hookah?
marleyskater420
5,000+ posts
Banned
Who cares? I'd much rather read good lyrics than a shitty battle anyday.
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- #1,633
TIME TO RAP AGAIN..... ANOTHER K1LLA HIT
some of u rappers keep hatin the shyt
but everytime i come to the thread i see you readin my hits
wonderin how it could flow out my mouth so flawlessly
spitted enough hits to make the dream team
but yet we need to take a step back and see who's all in it
well we got that cat name limit
i would mention dub c but he's already involved with the click
i would say so more names but when it comes to my mind - no one else is in it
i rap on a daily basis u come to my thread to live it
then u simply reply back giving me props on the story i wrote and how u could see yourself in it
but then there's always a hater
we got at least 3 or 4 in this thread everytime i re-visit
i try to hit the refresh button but it seems as if they never leave it
come in - to read every line i wrote analyzin my shyt
quick to call out my flow as if you're puffy and i'm b-legit
don't get the game twisted this aint makin the band but i am the future made hit
some of u rappers keep hatin the shyt
but everytime i come to the thread i see you readin my hits
wonderin how it could flow out my mouth so flawlessly
spitted enough hits to make the dream team
but yet we need to take a step back and see who's all in it
well we got that cat name limit
i would mention dub c but he's already involved with the click
i would say so more names but when it comes to my mind - no one else is in it
i rap on a daily basis u come to my thread to live it
then u simply reply back giving me props on the story i wrote and how u could see yourself in it
but then there's always a hater
we got at least 3 or 4 in this thread everytime i re-visit
i try to hit the refresh button but it seems as if they never leave it
come in - to read every line i wrote analyzin my shyt
quick to call out my flow as if you're puffy and i'm b-legit
don't get the game twisted this aint makin the band but i am the future made hit
- Thread Starter
- #1,634
biggie's get your grind on
limit
skippin’ down the block w/the volume on 10
not knowing I was creeping w/folks wondering why I was lurking
on the scene the boys down block caught my whip and ran inside the house
opened up the case and pulled their glocks out
The all ran outside - shots fired and someone knocked my rearview mirror out
had me questioning life wondering if it was death calling my name
I screamed reach for the back and grabbed the nine
Hit the gas as gunfire continued to fire
A little girl who was playing saw my car coming from a ways down the road
She ran inside the house called 911 and soon the police was on their way
They didn’t know that it was me vs. a crew of 10
All they knew was that there was a grey eclipse causing pandemonium
Whoops I hit someone’s mailbox and my front tire became flat
I knew it was that time that I grab the phone & call up the whole crew that had my back
I simply dialed 3 and 7 which was my speed dial to heaven
As the ring began to sound –
Suddenly all the gun shots ended
Folks ran away as the police entered
More later
limit
skippin’ down the block w/the volume on 10
not knowing I was creeping w/folks wondering why I was lurking
on the scene the boys down block caught my whip and ran inside the house
opened up the case and pulled their glocks out
The all ran outside - shots fired and someone knocked my rearview mirror out
had me questioning life wondering if it was death calling my name
I screamed reach for the back and grabbed the nine
Hit the gas as gunfire continued to fire
A little girl who was playing saw my car coming from a ways down the road
She ran inside the house called 911 and soon the police was on their way
They didn’t know that it was me vs. a crew of 10
All they knew was that there was a grey eclipse causing pandemonium
Whoops I hit someone’s mailbox and my front tire became flat
I knew it was that time that I grab the phone & call up the whole crew that had my back
I simply dialed 3 and 7 which was my speed dial to heaven
As the ring began to sound –
Suddenly all the gun shots ended
Folks ran away as the police entered
More later
bigbangtheory
5,000+ posts
CarAudio.com Veteran
dog...you think your gangsta?..well heres a newsflash for ya b*tchive seen white kids spittin better, on maury povich with bad turrets
and i aint f*ckin kidding, he had way more skill than you
even with his safety helmet, and a pint of elmers glue
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LOL! Had to laugh at that one.//content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/laugh.gif.48439b2acf2cfca21620f01e7f77d1e4.gif
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