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i've been passing time waitingput no one before me

my relationships are fading

not deeper, they've grown lighter

as the wind blew them away

i feel this pain, it's killing me

and there i go again

lyin to myself to ease this temporary sin

i wanted to be with you

i followed you

i tried to be you

i tried to be seen with you

and even when i had you

i didnt even know you

but what do i do

i write this mutha****in rhyme to ease the thought of us two

cuz after i saw

over your ****in wall of "glory"

i laughed, fell off like humty dumpty

please put me back together again

why did I endure this pain?

why did i lie to save my name?

why do i need you?

i dont, so step away

i don't really write rhymes, so it probly sounds like a rock song.

thumbs up?

thumbs down?
that isn't bad, doesn't sound like rap though. go to the gauntlet school of hip-hop lyricism.

 
Boricua, cubano, boricua cubano, boricua cubano, boricua

(Subele mambo pa que mi gata prenda lo motores) 3x

(Que se prepararen que lo que viene es pa que le den duro!)

 
that isn't bad, doesn't sound like rap though. go to the gauntlet school of hip-hop lyricism.
I dont really listen to rap, and as i said it probly sounds like a rock song instead cuz thats about all i listen to. I'll see if I can make my next more "rap".

 
my hands are shakin, knees hurtin

this asphalt is as black as your heart

where we are there's not a soul lurkin

no eyes on us, not a single ounce of light

my eyes are open, i don't see a thing

has this fear you brought stole my sight

i'm not a martyr, not a leader, not a sinner

why did u choose me?

the air between your finger and the trigger grows thinner

why am I scared? i can see the fear in your eyes as well

i rise and walked away, and there i fell...dead

 
My moma makes dammnn good pancakes

I like pimpin for hookers during cali earthquakes

I drive a big fat black EXPY...

I like give JNTARS mom a ride because she so SEXY

Livin' in the west side of Plano

I like poison dogs and cats with a gallon of draino

Somtimes they call me the a dirty ol' Peeper

but its hard to sneak up on people with sh*t on your sneaker

.... need I even go on..

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Lemans your rhymes are too uhhhhhhh...wordy?

So since basically I think your rhymes ****...let's battle.

mr. thesaurus put yo book down and take a listen

i thought i saw your rhyme in the bowl when i was pissin

linkin words together that lack flow and definition

you juxtaposed your words, no order or intuition

see i bet you don't know what the **** i jus said

cuz your words don't impress me

it just proves to me you can write down what u just read...

the recessitated semantically illicit gamut

****, there goes my flow, give me the bag so i can vomit

 
My moma makes dammnn good pancakesI like pimpin for hookers during cali earthquakes

I drive a big fat black EXPY...

I like give JNTARS mom a ride because she so SEXY

Livin' in the west side of Plano

I like poison dogs and cats with a gallon of draino

Somtimes they call me the a dirty ol' Peeper

but its hard to sneak up on people with sh*t on your sneaker

.... need I even go on..

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Expy's face looks like a bag full of mistakes,

big fat *** ugly mug, someone sweep his shit under a rug.

I'd like to punch him in the mouth, then kick him square down south.

his black expy's ridin low, only car his *** fit through the door (dow).

he talks about givin my mom a ride, but I AM fu(kin his bit(h on the side

i really cant stand his fat ugly ***, just prayin that his time will pass

one day I'll get him to shut the **** up, but by that time my minds gone corrupt

 
Lemans your rhymes are too uhhhhhhh...wordy?So since basically I think your rhymes ****...let's battle.

mr. thesaurus put yo book down and take a listen

i thought i saw your rhyme in the bowl when i was pissin

linkin words together that lack flow and definition

you juxtaposed your words, no order or intuition

see i bet you don't know what the **** i jus said

cuz your words don't impress me

it just proves to me you can write down what u just read...

the recessitated semantically illicit gamut

****, there goes my flow, give me the bag so i can vomit
****, there goes my flow, give me the bag so i can vomit

yes because it is quite vomit inducing

 
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