st8 spittin

[DBfan187 5,000+ posts]

Did Johnny Depp turn gay?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

 

[Gauntlet 5,000+ posts]

ok gauntlet, if u didn't like that one, i got some more for u here.
my rhyming opens eyes and closes the doors to your soul

coal is the color of ur life after i stole it in whole

why must u pretend to be apprehensive of me

i think i just may be able handle it up to a tolerable degree

can you see? i think i just blinded ur 1 eyed vision

i made the decision to give u a lyrical circumcision

cut off the unnecssary and bring beauty marks to these pages

your pride retuns slowly in baby step miniature stages

bloodflow is noticibly droppin i begin to contront you

read over my flows and gimme an analytical review

i excuse you for not paying attention to my talents

do my lines even begin to please ur palate?

i wiped the plate clean with my blinding similies and metaphors

i manufacture my rhymes from a higher level that u could never afford

ur poor, and yet i feel no remorse

i cut off ur funds and pension isn't something that u gain from the peace corps

it seems that i heard ur definition incorrectly

my metaphors flood ur heard but indirectly

i have to press and fold my lines for the people across the land

they disapear from my mouth like a oral sleight of hand

closing time is when we shut doors and close our blinds

my lines fill ur head and expand in time in ur mind

Sorry man....it's not that I didn't like it, it's that it was just bad. Fact, not opinion. You focus too much on words and semantics, look at the whole picture. Don't worry about punchlines and individual bars, look at the verse as a whole.

 

[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

leavin my mind on the edge everything's about to fall

u tried to trip me up when i climbed the f*cking wall

but tried is all u did cuz i reached the other side

u went behind to hide when u went around and lied

but the pain is in the past but the memory resides

it eats away my thoughts and its greater than the tides

i told ya once and twice but the sh*t u said is deep

i'm on a higher level but the path to this was steep

when i look down on your face all u do is weep and frown

i wish the clouds would fall and the rain would keep u down

DROWN BIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTCCCCCHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!...now its over...

 

[limitkid7 5,000+ posts]

grabbed the stick

cocked it into to 3 as the girl grabbed my dick

whipped around the corner and now i'll read the script

"pulled at the light put dem hazzards on"

she lifted up her skirt and showed that she had no panties on

soon as i noticed what she had done

up came a cop so it was time for me to run

i'm still today givin thanks for the tint

when u got 5 percent throughout your whip

its very hard for any normal cat w/a flash light to see thru it

::stay on the content::

that's what she said as i was drivin 22 down the buckhead strip

"mannnnnnnnn you got a stick"

better yet the best of both worlds, u best put it in 3rd and drive like u bout to have a fit

"baby that's not possible"

you'll never hear the exhaust when my 13 is droppin notes out below the cement

now my rear view mirror just fell off - next time i'll have to dynomat it

time to shift onto another subject

i'm not gonna lower it b/c its low enough

when the bass dropps its so low i scrape the paint off the groud

now you still askin how good it sounds??

lets just say the highs are tweek so loud

you'd never guess i got 7 inches followed by mannie fresh skippin beats in the background

live music is what i'm talkin bout

so when u put in that kill bill and blonde screams

ur eyes fall out

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

something caught my eye as i passed by the window

i saw my soul reflected back to me in convex prismal shadows

my life appeared there shortly after my soul passed

its held in pieces by a supernatural cast

my fate is overcast and the sun rises to greet it

it cowers in the corned expecting a new reason to climb out from its bottomless pit

i walked by the same window again and saw my physical reflection

the light bounced off my skin going in random directions

sunlight penetrated the barrier of my skin down to the melanin

changed the pigment from lonely to having no kin

looking back on that time when i revealed my interior self

i promise not to put my ego on the highest but yet rotten upper shelf

it would leave a sore on my heart, an permanent chancre

its time to look at other lives and be an entreprenuer

realize their destinies as the window revealed mine

turn the time on the international date line

so stop when u feel like your world is ending

its not, its that your true existence is pending

make the choices to begin ur own ressurection

only your instincts can point you in the correct direction

when i look at my hands i realise that i have 6 eyes

2 on my face, my hands and two on my head behind

the shadows that the rear 2 project while looking into my carved view of my skull

they see inside me and show me the little flicker of a soul

can i repent for the actions that i have forsaken

no, i live with it as a reminder to just let my being awaken

 

[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

piece together the broken parts of underlying trust

the picture is scattered only left for human lust

can't sort this out alone so i sink until i drown

its hard to breath but don't ya know i'm six feet under ground

my heart that beat with yours fades away till it dies

ya overcompensated what you said were only lies

i know its time, but i dont wanna see it end this way

your eyes they pierce my mind, pierce the night until its day

i'm gonna turn around til i fall away from you

my thoughts will still remain of all those things that we do

the path i've chosen here will prove hard but its true

we'll never see each other, lightness fades a grey hue

c'mon i want some critique on my rhymes...

 

[limitkid7 5,000+ posts]

picked up the big 10 pound book for rhymes

read the first verse and quickly skipped to the last line

it said to be continued and on the next page was my name i guess it was expect'n for me to spit my nine

i thought for a second and searched for a pen

it wouldn't take the limit long to destroy the previous rappers but yet blend in

mixed up my flow then i resulted to spit the best

i started off talkin about my beat and ended with layin my foes to rest

now if that wasn't a simple flow then i for dam* sure can't expect nothin less

now i request that u go and read what i previously wrote b/c its histroy and while i'm start off a new style, u'll still be **** on my first note

 

[limitkid7 5,000+ posts]

i read my last rhyme and just knew it couldn't end

i read some of the verses these cats spit and knew i had to begin

this thread has had some skill and also showed some fault

now i admit sometime i rap about the skrilla but then there's other times when i must rap about callin ya motha out

now now don't be upset

b/c she called me limit and i told her it was dub c then she asked to see me creep up past 3 not in the taurus but in the 03' w/o any beat so her son (you) couldn't hear her leave - now that we up the road i'm givin her enough the she's simply hooked on my degree

 

[limitkid7 5,000+ posts]

still playin the same beat but showin the same flava

its almost 1130 so should i do her noworlata

after gettin dome like that i just had to pull ova

didn't have a dolla to call triple A but i had enough change to see her do tricks w/a quarter

enough said.

 

[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

riding down the street, got the foot to the floor

blastin my beats thru xplods they knock the doors

i pick up some hoes carry dem *****es in my bed

i drop their panties faster than a feather tied to lead

ridin on sixteens look away they shine so bright

when i park it on da curb ya maybe can just mite

take a look, slob and drool at the massive diameter

these'll ride all on ya 22's packin mutha****in spinnas

got the 4.8, fast as hell, ya **** rite

put ya mustang upta this u'll lose the race yo man its green lite

and this rap it really sux i'm just bored so i spit it

eat a speaker yea its tasty but i bet it hurts when u shit it

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

riding down the street, got the foot to the floorblastin my beats thru xplods they knock the doors

i pick up some hoes carry dem *****es in my bed

i drop their panties faster than a feather tied to lead

ridin on sixteens look away they shine so bright

when i park it on da curb ya maybe can just mite

take a look, slob and drool at the massive diameter

these'll ride all on ya 22's packin mutha****in spinnas

got the 4.8, fast as hell, ya **** rite

put ya mustang upta this u'll lose the race yo man its green lite

and this rap it really sux i'm just bored so i spit it

eat a speaker yea its tasty but i bet it hurts when u shit it

this is so bad, we dont need to talk about it.

 

[limitkid7 5,000+ posts]

beat "the gang" by shyne

eh jo sometimes i just hear a beat and suddenly i spit flows

sometimes i notice auh Hoe

a few minutes lata, i'm skeetin in her throat

i don't like to rap about the nasty stuff

i simply spit to educate those that have not *f*c*d

but if ya open ya mouth you will get F**D up

shull nuff

i passed up the white stuff

got a degree and now i'm drivin by the saleman wonderin why shyne gave up

oh that's wasn't enough

i decided to go back to school so i can tell ya pop's whatsup

you can call me Dr. but i'm already skilled in perforwomen surgery all up in the cut

but even that was too much

so now i'm lean'n back wonderni when a real challenger will stand up

 

[limitkid7 5,000+ posts]

"go dj" by lil wayne

clean clean cleannnnnn

some call me clean b/c i walk w/slippas on wid the khakis w/o the crease

go to the barber shop to get a tep w/o the greese

no need to get up ho - please on me, drop to ya knees

i would pay ya a dolla but i just gave ya momma 10 g's

and no i'm not talkin bout money

i wanted to buy the 350

but had to settle for the gt

not to mention the s

which stands for style but u can call me sleepy

y use any enegry when u can barely walk from being too friendly

its okay ya man will be iight

he has no clue what we just did but afta tonight

he'll wonder why your so open wide

that's right ol girlz p'c was soooooooooooooo tight

believe it or not after 1 drop we were flyin high

don't ask me what happened

i was voting for bush until the Limit was named captin

 

[jemorgan85 10+ year member]

The past of this young boy wasn't made to be rehashed

But this is the lyrical story of the pain that amassed

He gave up, misunderstood at the bright age of 16

Supposed to be the best years, yet became anything but clean

Confused and distressed, he delved into the eyes of a single

So perfect yet so tainted, he sheltered her pain like a shingle

They worked together, and had so much in common

Hated eveyone else, but her experience was the evil shaman

It pained the boy to see her hidden agenda

Taunted with the facts, to be lax wasn't worth the splenda

He spent all his time, only trying to further impress

Like a mother with a newborn, her face he wanted to caress

One day her mind had a faint flicker of change

The kid got a taste of reality, and his tongue was bathed in her soft range

The sweet smell he had so longed was tasted

But only to be destroyed the next day, his struggle to be wasted

Like the ancient Aztec empire, his emotions were overtaken with a simple plan

Thus his blushing dimple faded and jaded was his new reprimand

She told him of those who tasted the sweetest taste she could offer

Like teasing a homeless dog, she held in front of his face her water

To the boy it was stagnant, the former bliss had just faded

But he still had the tendency to ponder what they may have created

Then the time came to finally depart from his former world

Three hours north brought on his conceited life, his revenge to be hurled

He starved himself, lifted weights until he exhausted

Got back into shape, and became the new hot kid that lost it

Anorexic and taking six Stackers every day

Doubled the recommended limit, a palpatation on the way

But he felt better thinking everyone to be beneath

Only to find himself more misearable under the facade he bequeathed

Lost as ever, this young man plans his future

Just then he realizes the one who can mend his suture

One he made fun of, as a conceited high school senior

He thought he was too good, but underneath she crept to his demeanor

She has always known that they should be together

But his negligence led them to both be miserable....almost forever

Until that one fateful day when he made his valiant leap

He started a relationship and alleviated her of her creep

Now they've been together for almost two years

The time has gone so fast, another 50 will bring more tears

Pledged never to depart these two are always connected

Not always happy, but the love is forever resurrected

Only the future can tell, what happens to this man

This is how he has grown up, I've seen it first hand

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

//content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/imdaman.gif.bc6c552e19aa4ad8c47461144f40eb1a.gif @ morgan. lol lemans almost cried. hehe. welcome back man. where ya been?