st8 spittin

[Gauntlet 5,000+ posts]

Have you ever considered staying on topic, avoiding over-used lines, using proper structure, sticking to a cadence, or having skill? One of them might help you out.

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

outlaw, that sucked balls. and im black and i don't talk like that at all.

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

Have you ever considered staying on topic, avoiding over-used lines, using proper structure, sticking to a cadence, or having skill? One of them might help you out.

cadence is too big a word for this forum.

 

[BASS OUTLAW 10+ year member]

i donnu man its freestyle , what can i do ??

 

[Gauntlet 5,000+ posts]

Stop trying.

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

i donnu man its freestyle , what can i do ??

nothing so stfu.

 

[BASS OUTLAW 10+ year member]

"buck on them *****Z WHO HATE WHO WANNA BE IN MY SHOES LIVE MY LIFE , BUT CANT CARRY MY weight , i understand that ENVY is part of the game , but make no MISTAKE , u n i !! , we R not the SAME"

 

[tRiGgEr 5,000+ posts]

Bass outlaw sounds more like just a ryhme than freestyle but is hella good. All the other crap I read on here sucks.

 

[LuNaTiC 10+ year member]

u get tossed up and murdered for 6 shots

let the stones fall and the bodies drop

comin bak on the scene, less poetic and more mean

lemans is garbage, its been known for ages

1 bar wasted, on this monkey that needs to be locked in cages

this battles turnin like pages

my battle raps are shameless

you talk too much and your words seem aimless

listen..............

your a pus5y and bloods drippin. i remain sick

 

[BASS OUTLAW 10+ year member]

Bass outlaw sounds more like just a ryhme than freestyle but is hella good. All the other crap I read on here sucks.

thanks man //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/smile.gif.1ebc41e1811405b213edfc4622c41e27.gif

 

[LuNaTiC 10+ year member]

Bass outlaw is terrible.

 

[BASS OUTLAW 10+ year member]

Lunatic , thanks for ur comments //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/smile.gif.1ebc41e1811405b213edfc4622c41e27.gif u r good

 

[LuNaTiC 10+ year member]

Thank you outlaw, but no 1 else seems to think so.

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

"buck on them *****Z WHO HATE WHO WANNA BE IN MY SHOES LIVE MY LIFE , BUT CANT CARRY MY weight , i understand that ENVY is part of the game , but make no MISTAKE , u n i !! , we R not the SAME"

you use n!ggas over and over again. i have never cussed once in my rhymes. thats the mark of a lyricist, not having to fillin blanks with profanity. look at morgan. look at gauntlet. hell, even look at pjchevy some times. no profanity.

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

Lunatic , thanks for ur comments //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/smile.gif.1ebc41e1811405b213edfc4622c41e27.gif u r good

he called you terrible...you're thanking him then complimenting him?