New song - Diss Response 2 - Acapella

[Phatillusion 5,000+ posts]

Pwned!

He's pwning himself. His diss to R.E.D, is like a diss on himself, when you **** that bad, you're only making yourself look like shit. Why would R.E.D waste his time on a fool like that anyway, unless he sucks too.

 

[Phatillusion 5,000+ posts]

is that guy there with you? threaten you? It sounds like you're being forced to read.

Andy Milonakis is better than you.

I've farted better rhymes than that.

 

[DBfan187 5,000+ posts]

more like A.D.D.

 

[Johnny Drama 5,000+ posts]

Your raps arent fluent more choped up. Oh and your lisp is ruining it for me too.

 

[saywhat? 5,000+ posts]

Andy Milonakis is better than you.

just cuz i have cheese on my head dont call me a cheese head, because i have a bruce lee on my head doesnt make me a lee head.

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

BWAHAHAA!

ridin is a classic

concrete is baack!

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

dare i quote illogic:

"my favorite things......an emcee that can crush without a cuss"

keep that in mind //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/wink.gif.608e3ea05f1a9f98611af0861652f8fb.gif

 

[DBfan187 5,000+ posts]

Will Smith?

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[saywhat? 5,000+ posts]

"u cant ride a bike with balance, u cant rock a mic without talent"-atmosphere

 

[qtipextra 5,000+ posts]

People, I never did SERIOUSLY consider rapping as a career. Then this fuckin RED disses me, and so I had to try and prove myself. And after his second diss, word got around my entire school. Now people shout out "cinder block" at me makin fun of me even though they aint heard me. So wut do I do? Im trying to get betta real fast, and prove that I can do wut I wanna do. If I just forget about reponding to his second diss, then eveyone calls me a pussy, and who knows wut that will amount too. Or I keep goin betterin myself, and one of these days be sumthin, and nobody will be able to say shit. Cuz when people say shit, i tend to realease my anger, and bad thigs happen, and im on probation, I cant afford ta get in any fights or any trouble at all.

 

[DBfan187 5,000+ posts]

People, I never did SERIOUSLY consider rapping as a career. Then this fuckin RED disses me, and so I had to try and prove myself. And after his second diss, word got around my entire school. Now people shout out "cinder block" at me makin fun of me even though they aint heard me. So wut do I do? Im trying to get betta real fast, and prove that I can do wut I wanna do. If I just forget about reponding to his second diss, then eveyone calls me a pussy, and who knows wut that will amount too. Or I keep goin betterin myself, and one of these days be sumthin, and nobody will be able to say shit. Cuz when people say shit, i tend to realease my anger, and bad thigs happen, and im on probation, I cant afford ta get in any fights or any trouble at all.

laughing my ****ing *** off!

 

[marleyskater420 5,000+ posts]

few things... 1.)you are white, type like it.

2.) You need to not sound so frantic, come up with better lyrical shit then spit it,and it will sound better.

3.) Work really hard on your next song, perfect it,and develop much better ryhmes, that way, when you bring it out, people will be mesmorized by it, and not want to shoot their speakers like you make people want to do now.

4.) Why do people from Idaho rap? Shouldn't you be eating 'tots, or feeding a llama?

 

[packerfan 10+ year member]

People, I never did SERIOUSLY consider rapping as a career. Then this fuckin RED disses me, and so I had to try and prove myself. And after his second diss, word got around my entire school. Now people shout out "cinder block" at me makin fun of me even though they aint heard me. So wut do I do? Im trying to get betta real fast, and prove that I can do wut I wanna do. If I just forget about reponding to his second diss, then eveyone calls me a pussy, and who knows wut that will amount too. Or I keep goin betterin myself, and one of these days be sumthin, and nobody will be able to say shit. Cuz when people say shit, i tend to realease my anger, and bad thigs happen, and im on probation, I cant afford ta get in any fights or any trouble at all.

Dude, just shut the fvck up, seriously. Your talking in circles and it makes you sound like a retard (well, thats a given) First you say you dont want to rap as a career, but yet your tryin to prove that you can do what you wanna do? But do us all a favor and es tee ef u.

 

[jujumantb 10+ year member]

A few things...

Why do you have to talk about violence in every line to get a "diss" across? The key to something like that is to have fun with it, instead of "i'll cut your head off", use what you know about him to poke fun at a personal level, that diss was just a generic, violent, fake, excuse for a rhyme. Metaphors are your friend, listen to Word of Mouf (the song not album) by ludacris.

Right now, the only thing you have going for you is enunciation (besides the lisp). You can rap decently fast and still be understandable. Flow still needs work, writing needs ALOT of work.

I think I've posted this before, but heres the last thing I wrote, I know I cant rap, but me and my buddies have fun with it.

http://media.putfile.com/MakeYourMoveverse2

 

[DIPayton 10+ year member]

keep workin man. Remember who you are too... you sound like you wanna be way more gangster than you are. Just be real and take your time with it.