My Funk Volume Producer Contest entry (It BANGS hard!)

[Dylan Beatz]

An independent record label is having a contest called "Don't Fu[n]k Up Our Lyrics".

Here's my entry i submitted. It's SwizZz's acapella over my instrumental. Please take a listen and let me know what you think.



I'd really appreciate some feedback. Also if you like it could you please vote for me. It only takes a few seconds. The link is in the youtube description

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[snoopdan 5,000+ posts]

 

[Dylan Beatz]

Sorry if this seems like spam. I just like getting feedback on my stuff. I also gave you guys a free download link so you can bump it in your rides. Trust me it hits.

This site needs a music section

 

[Dylan Beatz]

edit: accidental double post

 

[snoopdan 5,000+ posts]

4 poast, joined today....yep we don't give a fuck. This is dome //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/fyi.gif.9f1f679348da7204ce960cfc74bca8e0.gif

 

[Dylan Beatz]

ive had a different username here in the past, just forgot the password

 

[05fronty 5,000+ posts]

i banged hard last night

 

[brodeisel 10+ year member]

Feggot op spamming bit

 

[R34P3R 10+ year member]

Background music is a little overpowering and a little too slow.

 

[SplAffair 10+ year member]

Hmm I forgot about hopsin. I need to see if he's dropped any new stuff.

 

[Dylan Beatz]

Background music is a little overpowering and a little too slow.

Thanks for actually listening and giving feedback. What do you mean by slow? It's the same tempo and in the right spot on the beat.

 

[R34P3R 10+ year member]

I thought that the tempo was a little slow for the video but almost on beat with the lyrics. It was a pretty good beat though. Keep working on it.

 

[Germ305 10+ year member]

Beat is really generic IMO. sounds like 90% of people on soundclick...If this is an swizz beatz acapella the lyrics obviously are accounted for...but your delivery was pretty good.

 

[murph 10+ year member]

Lame beat sounds like you made that shit in garageband. Rapping is with the wrong man here and the lyrics are meh. Overall it was not remotely good.