its stupid but oh well

[SATX210]

take this to court, maybe they will dismiss your ticket. since you are well spoken

 

[Railrocker 10+ year member]

Dude it wasnt that bad I dug it. Some people are just haters.

 

[bigbangtheory 5,000+ posts]

I might not be that bad if you would slow the hell down and maybe stop taking speed before you take the mic. I mean the very 1st min. wasnt that bad, after that went down hill quick. I give you props that you are not that bad, just nothing special. My friend who I work with will have to take a listen to this. He is a good judge at the rap game. He is a talented dude and is in a rap group called "straightjacket". His shit is tight. I will post one of his lyrics in st8spittin sometime. Overall need a lot of work, but wasnt that bad. Just slow it down some.

Ready for the flame.//content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/hide.gif.2d479cfd917eedfe201353b91522ceab.gif

 

[sumone 10+ year member]

I dig...I understood what you was sayin'...that end part was tight!

As far as pronounciation & annunciation, it was okay...wasn't really bad. I think a little EQ would help...bring out some midrange & presence & recess that low-midrange/high-midbass around 200-400hz could be a start.

 

[LuNaTiC 10+ year member]

Fucking horrible, The last part was awesome roffle. I couldnt understand a word but it just sounded cool. Slow it down and use your "real" voice, instead of trying to sound smooth and "pimp" like. Doesnt work at all....

 

[RandyJ 10+ year member]

I like how your voice sounds, but I do not like your style. Twista>you as previously mentioned. Keep up the practice though and you may be worth listening to some day.

is this just playing around or are you trying to actually dosomething with music?

 

[Expy2K 10+ year member]

Slow the raps down with that beat..

and lower the piano volume. or complete change it..

but its not bad..

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[SATX210]

why are you even producing with a keyboard. thats wack in itself. i have the perfect stepping stone for a producer for sale. i have an MPC2500, ill sell it to ya for 1600

 

[bigbangtheory 5,000+ posts]

why are you even producing with a keyboard. thats wack in itself. i have the perfect stepping stone for a producer for sale. i have an MPC2500, ill sell it to ya for 1600

My buddy just picked one of those up. Fooking thing is off the chain.

 

[iagrdshaka 5,000+ posts]

don't give me any comments unless they're nice.. i know its a crappy production, vocals ****, quality is as$ but i was experimenting with my mic and trying to get my positioning correct and what not so i made this by accident... if any one has anything to say feel free.. don't flame bishes i don't have time for BS

Decipha Fukin' Round

sounds like poo

 

[zachzchw 5,000+ posts]

Why would you even post something like that?

If you ever make it in music, someone will find this shit, and then youll be all //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/crying.gif.ec0ebefe590df0251476573bc49e46d8.gif and //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/blush.gif.99bc659ee2012b7d826165e26fb5eebe.gif and //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/crap.gif.7f4dd41e3e9b23fbd170a1ee6f65cecc.gif .

Everything of yourself you put out there is an advertisement, something to stick in peoples heads.

This is what you want them to think of when they think of you?

 

[Eugenics 5,000+ posts]

flow and breath control, you have neither. go home kid. this isn't 8 mile. there is no plot. no second chance. no greater meaning. no hidden meaning. no happy ending. go home

 

[spitfirees20 10+ year member]

flow and breath control, you have neither. go home kid. this isn't 8 mile. there is no plot. no second chance. no greater meaning. no hidden meaning. no happy ending. go home

lol, great stuff. It wasn't that bad, but I hated it personally.