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[qtipextra 5,000+ posts]

It's not too bad, the beat is ok. Sounds like something I'd like all thizzled up.
But you need to work on some of the lyrics a little. Rapping about cars and guns = overrated.

You've got a PM //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/fyi.gif.9f1f679348da7204ce960cfc74bca8e0.gif

Yeah the lyrics definitely could use some work. That was written a long time ago, I just kept the lyrics as is. I wanted to basically do a new recording on a new beat, and this is how it came out.

 

[TnT_Sounds 10+ year member]

all rappers keep the same moral... hoes, guns, money, cars, etc...

Good beats by the way and you've got some talent.. Just try harder

 

[Pyro_By_Nature 5,000+ posts]

Rapping is hit or miss. With the right beat I can go on a sick *** flow for a few minutes. Sometimes I couldn't put a couple lines together to save my life.

 

[qtipextra 5,000+ posts]

all rappers keep the same moral... hoes, guns, money, cars, etc...
Good beats by the way and you've got some talent.. Just try harder

Thanks man. I am trying to work on a new song. It's going to take a lot of work, but it's not all guns, money, hoes type of stuff. If you think this is good, my next one will be great. I am trying to use better words and a more advanced vocabulary, while trying to maintain a smooth flow. I am really going to put some effort into it. It will be a while before it's done though.

 

[qtipextra 5,000+ posts]

BassInMySubs is getting way too much air time up there. Bump for my shit.

 

[bigbangtheory 5,000+ posts]

Ummm, better than I could ever do, but still lol!

 

[WOT]

Sounds just fine man, alot better than I could do.

Only thing I noticed is when you say "we can take a ride", it didnt sound right, sounded the same all the time, couldnt tell ya exactly how Id prefer it sound, "ride" just seemed to be said to fast and higher pitched.

Pretty good man

Good job

 

[Andrew2006 10+ year member]

sounds good to me good job not bad at all keep it up

 

[Pyro_By_Nature 5,000+ posts]

Thanks man. I am trying to work on a new song. It's going to take a lot of work, but it's not all guns, money, hoes type of stuff. If you think this is good, my next one will be great. I am trying to use better words and a more advanced vocabulary, while trying to maintain a smooth flow. I am really going to put some effort into it. It will be a while before it's done though.

Boats and hoes! //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/laugh.gif.48439b2acf2cfca21620f01e7f77d1e4.gif

 

[x2o 10+ year member]

Sounds just fine man, alot better than I could do.
Only thing I noticed is when you say "we can take a ride", it didnt sound right, sounded the same all the time, couldnt tell ya exactly how Id prefer it sound, "ride" just seemed to be said to fast and higher pitched.

Pretty good man

Good job

Yeah man, I realized the same thing in the chorus. The way it's said makes it kinda sound like Right instead of Ride.. Sounds like the word Ride needs to be extended a bit, lol, hard to explain through text but if we were talking face-to-face I'd be able to point it out to you in a second //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/tongue.gif.6130eb82179565f6db8d26d6001dcd24.gif.

Pretty decent though, liking the beat as well //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/smile.gif.1ebc41e1811405b213edfc4622c41e27.gif.

 

[Twistid 5,000+ posts]

super-ultra-mega gay... like... really gay

 

[Blue Fury 10+ year member]

I didn't listen to it but I'll give it more credit than the noise from that fat white lump

 

[speedfreak28 10+ year member]

this is a joke right? It sounds like corky rappin

 

[qtipextra 5,000+ posts]

this is a joke right? It sounds like corky rappin

It's all just in fun. In no way am I claiming to be the worlds next rapper.

 

[speedfreak28 10+ year member]

It's all just in fun. In no way am I claiming to be the worlds next rapper.

then carry on sir