st8 spittin

[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

no two rhmyes are never the same

the "proper" way of sayig that should be...

"no two rhymes are ever the same" or

"two rhymes are never the same"

u mite as well said

" 2 rhymes are th same"

2 negs make a pos

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

the "proper" way of sayig that should be..."no two rhymes are ever the same" or

"two rhymes are never the same"

u mite as well said

" 2 rhymes are th same"

2 negs make a pos

ok thank you pj for telling me what i already said in my post. i said it made no sense and didn't deserve to be in here or somethin like that. that flow is dead now.

 

[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

ok thank you pj for telling me what i already said in my post. i said it made no sense and didn't deserve to be in here or somethin like that. that flow is dead now.

no prob...always here to help //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/suave.gif.858fc102f7646e678ee8af7e1fbc41d1.gif

 

[bass maniak 10+ year member]

i hope ya got backup, get yo bags and pack upi'm bout to hit the stage, and its time for me to rack up

lack of.....skill, you need some practice

rhymes so water-logged, i guess i'll call u "cactus"

u cant match this, u cant touch this

get the **** out, your rhymes need some substance

u talk about me, using part of your "rhyme"

i only did it once, u did it ****in three times

its a crime and a crying shame

how your rhymes could be ,so mutha ****in lame

so the next time u want to rap, versus me

i take u out and beat you down personally

i dont need no ****in backup

in a battle,ill smoke your *** like tobaco

you cant even rigth a fcukin medaphore

let alone rap half decent,your skill's need increasing

and 100% tight shit is what im releasing

read my shit close before you start testin me

there aint no contest between u and me

cause im in the higher ranks,you a soilder tryng to take on a tank

do i gotta explain the outcome?i sudgest u contain your mouth son

cause shit gets amatuers like you cut down

i guess u got sudden impulse but i wish you didnt

cause me battling u is an insult,no shit ima win it

after i replyed to u this shit was finished

then you wrote again

more retarted than a priest sinning

when i read your shit i cant help but lol...........literaly

cause verbaly you aint hurtin me....your the one that should be imbarased

i feel sorry for your parents,now everyone bare witness to this battle

ima have ppl thinking your so wack youll be hiding in your own shadow's

not that hard of a task.....you do half the work writing those sad raps

i aint leaving u no slack,you a qaurter back about to get sacked

show anyone these 4 verses and ask em

20 bucks they burst out laughing

it'll be undisputed,your rymes are to wack for me to compute

you got .5% skill's with 99.5% dilutant

no doubt u said my rymes where dry......

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

just outta curiousity, can anyone here make a flow without having to fill in gaps with cusses? come on! not as artistic, but bass's last one was pretty good.

 

[97JeepTJ 10+ year member]

^^^ not that good

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

no ur right jeep. the one b4 it was his best. but whats with all the profanity? it doesn't need to be used to rap...

 

[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

i'll take your breath away with these rhymes that i'm rappin

goin fast, slowin down, thats how its gonna happen

u flappin, like a bird with undeveloped wings

it aint happnin, cuz u aint got nothin to bring

i'll smush u like a bug, until u plead for your life

but you're like a cockroack, u dont mutha****in die

u try, to rhyme, but you get thrown like a dime

its time, cuz i've heard better rhymes from a mime

like grime, you're there but you're not there in time

to keep up, with these grammatical flows

i put time, and jus read and it mutha****in shows

whose, ahead, in this game they call rappin

cuz when i'm on the stage i got the whole thing hapnin

dont strike back, none, cuz you're bark's got no bite

u should be charged for a crime and be put up for life

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

its time, cuz i've heard better rhymes from a mimelike grime, you're there but you're not there in time

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[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

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is that in a sarcastic sense...lol...i really cant tell with u...lol

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

no im being serious lol. dunno why, but it impacted me like none other

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

these posers convlusion, u thrashin violently

call me silent assassin, ill end ur misery silently

dont touch my weapons or the pen hand

you'll be 6 ft under, but not found on the land

is the way that i flow,

so quick, its a wonder that ur so slow

but u thought u were good

till i showed up and showed u the way

to behave in this town of rhymes

goin with the beats in time

cause u just in ur classes nappin

while im flowin and rappin

better take lessons from the master

there aint no question

im the main teacher

rappin 101 is in session

 

[pj_chevy03 10+ year member]

better watch yo back, cuz yo back aint watchin you

got my knife got my guns, and i'm ready to shoot

so u think u got flow, but u know u cant show

its low, how i take u down, thats all up in the game

head's framed, you put yo fam-i-ly to shame

gotta tame, this beast that lives inside of me

i dont know, i know, that there's a better way

**** that shit, save your breath for another day

its a shame... to live a life like that

it feels like you been hit with a baseball bat

dont worry, i'll take u down, no sign of hope

u took a hit of this, now u addicted to dope

u fallin, down, your last chance, grab the rope

no time to mope, too late, u missed your chance

my rhymes put u in a mutha ****in trance...

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

i guess you could call this the dance with the devil

beaten up and roughed up, lookin disheveled

stop tellin those lies you good for

cause with anymore ill cut u off and u wont have nothin to live for

no children screamin or rims gleamin

no women to love, everyone is leavin

cause of one little mistake that u made many years b4

you followed pj chevy into the bad lyricist core

now you flow like him, rhymes choppy and weak

am i dry as a cactus, or am i wet as a drink

or as a shrink, goin in minds in time

to get in these lines to sign autographs

for the best flows in the world

nothin but traps of fake rhymers like him

they so bad even my dog barks at them

he comes onto the stage, i got my veggies ready

when i throw these tomatoes, u gonna hope they not heavy

 

[bass maniak 10+ year member]

cuz i've heard better rhymes from a mime\

i have heard this before,not 100% where tho.

ill be back later to write anotehr verse,i gotta go install a system right now.