resume

[Flipx99 5,000+ posts]

I hope this is okay to post in the lounge. I have to submit my application to be on the credit union board tomorrow. I have a decent shot since I work closely with the chairman of the board. If any of you are from around middle tennessee, I am sure you have heard of AEDC credit union. We are the largest (by number of depositors) credit union in the state of Tennessee. Here is a copy of my resume, I was wondering if anyone had any tips or comments.

EDUCATION

2003-Present Middle Tennessee State University; Major in Finance, Minor in Business Finance and Political Science

2002-2003 Tennessee State University; Major in Electrical Engineering

EMPLOYMENT

2005-Present Cost Analyst Co-Op Tullahoma, TN

-Conduct spreadsheet analysis to gain financial insight into

test projects

-Collect and organize data from various sources for presentation

-Complete various tasks, as assigned

2002-Present Head Cashier, Lowe’s Home Improvement, Store 1626 Smyrna, TN

-Promote customer service and satisfaction

-Coordinate activities of subordinates

-Execute proper money-handling procedures

-Responsible for inventory maintenance

-Secure perimeters to prevent loss

2005 Intern, Tennessee State Legislature Nashville, TN

-Report directly to State Representative John Hood, 48th District

-Prepare bills for presentation to committee members

-Assist in constituent service

-Assist in coordination of committee meetings

-Attend committee meetings

HONORS & ACTIVITIES

-Selected to State Internship Program on behalf of MTSU

-Dean’s List

-Member- Financial Management Association

-Member- Mustang Club of America

-Member- Golden Key Honor Society

ADDITIONAL QUALIFICATIONS

-Strong leadership capabilities while facilitating a team-based work environment

-Familiar with current events in the financial arena

-Able to coordinate and oversee multiple activities simultaneously

-Strong public speaking and presentation skills

-Computer literate and trained in Microsoft Office programs

-Posses strong selling skills the ability to motivate others

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[MikeofTulsa Moderator]

thats just a list of everything, I would also suggest adding a "goals" section or a mission statment type of thing. if you have msword or any of those they have pretty good resume buliders jus follow the info in the program.

 

[Flipx99 5,000+ posts]

I would pay $100 for a goal. I don't have goals because I don't know what I want to do. I live a pretty reactive life, just seek and take advantages of opportunities, but don't know what to do once I achieved them.

Plus, I can't really add anymore and keep it to one page.

Thanks for the help though

 

[stones 10+ year member]

Make shit up

Like this-

OBJECTIVE: Your business looks like a nice place to work, I would like to become a part of your team and help your business achieve its future goals however I can.

QUALIFICATIONS

Honest to a fault, I can be left to accomplish tasks on my own without the need for constant supervision. Clean living without alcohol or drugs allows me the ability to learn tasks quickly and commit myself entirely on the necessary task. I enjoy keeping busy and am trained in WHIMS and CPR.

Then job history..

 

[Flipx99 5,000+ posts]

I have considered an objective statement. Looks like a good start, thanks.

 

[stratusrt01 10+ year member]

I went through a resume writing class a couple months ago, and I learned a lot. You really need an objective statement. I have a good example for a resume if you need one. Here's a copy of my objective and summary, just to give you an idea of what to try for.

HEADER (NAME, ADDRESS, PHONE NUMBER)

OBJECTIVE

A position with an organization seeking professional workers with diverse experience, training, and a proven record of reliability and success.

SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS

Over thirteen years of experience in the U.S. Army. In depth experience with supervision and training of over 10 personnel at a time on a complex weapon system and administrative procedures. Counseled personnel to achieve their future goals. Strong knowledge of Microsoft Word, Excel and PowerPoint with good oral and written communication skills. Granted a SECRET security clearance. Served in Operation Iraqi Freedom and Operation Enduring Freedom as a liaison supervisor. Promoted and recognized for professional expertise and dedication.

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY

blah blah blah

EDUCATION

blah blah blah

 

[Flipx99 5,000+ posts]

I like that objective statement, you mind if I use it?

 

[Flipx99 5,000+ posts]

How about "To utilize knowledge and skills gained from both a university setting and outside research to obtain employment in the financial services industry."

 

[squeak9798 5,000+ posts]

ADDITIONAL QUALIFICATIONS

-Strong leadership capabilities while facilitating a team-based work environment

-Familiar with current events in the financial arena

-Able to coordinate and oversee multiple activities simultaneously

-Strong public speaking and presentation skills

-Computer literate and trained in Microsoft Office programs

-Posses strong selling skills the ability to motivate others

I've always been taught not to use subjective traits in your qualifications/skills section (such as "strong leadership capabilities"). Stick with verifiable, objective statements ("trained in MS Office programs"). Nobody wants to hear about what you think you are, they want to know what qualities you actually posses.

Anyways...here's the Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL)...has some good tips and outlines and whatnot: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/pw/index.html#sub2