R.I.P Daniel Marcel Chapdelaine....

[bass maniak 10+ year member]

Father of 6, aged 1 - mid 20's

I have written a song dedicated to my father who just months ago, took his own life....in would could be said as on of the worse ways. I got alot of feelings of pain for not giving him forgivness over some things and why things had to go the way they did......without me helping the situation....

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[cpierce 5,000+ posts]

I don't know the whole story, but don't blame yourself man. Life is far too short to take the blame on something that you probably had no control over.

 

[90accordman 5,000+ posts]

sorry about the loss i'll check out the song later

 

[Digital B 10+ year member]

Sorry to hear about your dad.

But, about the song. Dont take this wrong.. its just constructive ctritism(spelling>me). But in the intro/hook/bridge/chorus. There was no emtion. In a song like this.. should be full of it to truely pull the listener in. The verse had emotion. The flow was alright, but some spots its like you talked the flow.. like silkk the shocker. Not sure if thats what you're going for. I'd suggestion adding another verse.. so its not just one. But, its good none-the-less. Just room for improvement. Like I said, dont take it wrong. I'm sure its a touchy subject. Keep your head up and keep spit'N.

-Bobby.

 

[baseballer1100 5,000+ posts]

I like the song...sorry to hear about your loss.

 

[Fast1one 10+ year member]

Very sorry about your loss...everyone is right, cant blame yourself for something like this. Good song....

 

[SyKo13 5,000+ posts]

*sigh*....Another death.....Sorry bro......

 

[bass maniak 10+ year member]

Thank you guys for your sympathy, but its kinda hard not to blame myself. I dont really wanna post the whole story up but one of the main things was that I was suposed to visit him for a few days on monday, I lied and didnt end up going even tho I said I would. I recieved the phone call the following thursday and I know for a fact that it wouldnt have happened if I went.....

 

[Savstyle 10+ year member]

Sorry to hear about your dad.
But, about the song. Dont take this wrong.. its just constructive ctritism(spelling>me). But in the intro/hook/bridge/chorus. There was no emtion. In a song like this.. should be full of it to truely pull the listener in. The verse had emotion. The flow was alright, but some spots its like you talked the flow.. like silkk the shocker. Not sure if thats what you're going for. I'd suggestion adding another verse.. so its not just one. But, its good none-the-less. Just room for improvement. Like I said, dont take it wrong. I'm sure its a touchy subject. Keep your head up and keep spit'N.

-Bobby.

i Agree with some of what this guy is sayin. The hook is lackin emotion, Espically considering how emotional the verses are. Gotta Even it out. Good song tho really good song. Like It Alot. But i do think it needs another verse. And it sounds like u slowed down your compared to your other songs, if u pace up ur flow song would be crazy.

But stay up homie, DO NOT Blame yourself, Wont do anything but cause more pain. And jus do what you do and make him proud.

 

[supraman1379 10+ year member]

Im sorry about your dad. And nice song.

 

[supraman1379 10+ year member]

And you dont need to blame yourself

 

[LeofromtheH 10+ year member]

god bless.

 

[JoshHd6 10+ year member]

RIP to ur dad...nice song bro..

 

[spoken 10+ year member]

Sorry to hear that man, and nice song.

 

[Rasheedhos]

may your dad RIP, Great song it's a good way to get things out, i understand that your only human, understand that your dad was only human and for those people we think we know your don't know anything about them, my mom's friend just went in the same way (may he Rest In Peace) he too has a son, but you have to be strong for your family, you did take the time to let your feelings out which is a great thing. No one expects you to know how to deal with this type of things, you may not forgive him but those he left behind, at the end of the day all you guys have is each other. Since your strong enough to be the one to let out your emotions please look after those he left behind and make sure they don't go down the wrong path becuase those who he left behind might be feeling the same way and you guys can help each other... Sorry to hear about your dad and anyone who goes that way... May they all rest in peace and god keep them safe til we meet again..