Please critique my resume' [link included]

[theCybe 5,000+ posts]

http://www.thecybe.com/resume http://www.thecybe.com/resume/resume-webedit.htm

Please provide feedback on either or both; Preferably the second version;

Note, I realize the "left side is cut off," ignore that.

Thanks //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/greedy.gif.5a53e6246569d7ab79867170f3b06629.gif

Objective position is Network tech / Computer maintenance for the callfloor.

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[vosschs 5,000+ posts]

link on the second one doesnt work for me

 

[theCybe 5,000+ posts]

Fixed

 

[theCybe 5,000+ posts]

Any Target/Objective suggestions?

 

[SteelWheel 10+ year member]

shouldn't the promoted to lines be inverted? Was QA your most recent position?