Give this a listen......

[Chevillac 5,000+ posts]

http://media.putfile.com/Concrete

Notice in the song he says "I know everyone said it was a waste of time" thats because we kept telling him not to do it. I said it was stupid. But listen anyway. The music starts at 2:00.

chuckle chuckle kekekekekeke

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[Hook Me Up 10+ year member]

its not bad man i kinda like it, lyrics - not so great but i like the beat

 

[JimJ 5,000+ posts]

I like it //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/smile.gif.1ebc41e1811405b213edfc4622c41e27.gif

 

[DBfan187 5,000+ posts]

sucks worse than Divine Brown.

 

[Chevillac 5,000+ posts]

The lyrics

Yeah I know your style

you been watching too much 8 mile,

had that shit on repeat,

then all of a sudden tought you were from the streets.

but that aint truenot even in your dreams,

and You say your name is concret

cause you hard as hell

motherfcuker i seen your picture your a fat ***

whos soft as gel,

You should a never ripped them rhymes,

you should a known in time

some one would figure it out

but **** am i talking about,

lets just get straight to the point,

about the fact your a ******,

and yous about to get dropped like a bad habbit,

thinking your B ****ing rabbit,

when really the only time you spit is when you ****

a dick,

please man,

your stupid *** cant rap

and your shit is less then whack

you probably smoked a little to much grass,

when you decided to write

and put your mouth to the mic,

i mean seriously who, you trying to fool,

oh i get you did the shit to just be cool,

Concrete, I hammer through you,

like the streets would,

if they could

if you you ever set foot into a hood,

thinking its all good,

you wouldnt even last ten seconds,

before your white *** would get chased out breathless,

you and your crew would be defenseless,

oh wait i forgot,

you aint got ,

no crew, its really just you,

and some other white dude,

who sits there and

tells you yeah rappin is cool,

mother ****er,

please stop the nonsense,

your shit dont even make sense,

sounding like your dyslexic,

reading your rhymes,

of the page,

one word at a time, all of beat like,

"Mother ****ing ***** I hate you,

I wish I didnt date you,"

You shoulda at least rehearsed the verse,

Before you got all emotional and started to burst,

Nah **** it,

you probably would a just sounded worse,

why don’t you stop stutterin and mutterin,

and go back to what you do best,

taking it in the *** like a

prison ***** who snitched,

a prick, who gets his *** kicked, every day,

for trying to be black and looking like a hick.

thats it you trick. just please stop trying

to flow, let it go, your white guy

who will never be fly,

and please dont cry,

its just a fact a life,

just do us all a favor,

and go slit your wrists with a knife,

real deep,

till it bleeds and bleeds,,

and you can no longer see

or breathe, then we can all live on,

and never have to hear another one of your songs.

 

[Eugenics 5,000+ posts]

interesting

 

[iagrdshaka 5,000+ posts]

sounds like crap to me

 

[tRiGgEr 5,000+ posts]

Has potential. But as of now he needs directing and a bit of production. And is not enjoyable to listen to.

 

[sumone 10+ year member]

I liked it...

just do us all a favor,and go slit your wrists with a knife,

dayumm...really some tension goin' on!

 

[ss3079 5,000+ posts]

I love it.

 

[InhumanAcura 5,000+ posts]

yeaaaaaaaah booooooooiiiii!

 

[brad 10+ year member]

Sweet

 

[negativezeroz 5,000+ posts]

yeaaaaaaaah booooooooiiiii!

//content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/hilarious.gif.02a037aad04aa96f19982b298a3d70a8.gif Eminem > that guy trying to rap

once he said something about too much 8mile I just stopped it...

 

[Mark_ab 5,000+ posts]

//content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/uhoh.gif.c07307dd22ee7e63e22fc8e9c614d1fd.gif

 

[2kchevy06civic 5,000+ posts]

I actually like those lyrics. They are pretty funny, and if he is trying to bash someone he does a dam* good job of it.

I haven't listend to the song, but I like the lyrics.

edit: after listening to the song, he doesn't flow very well. It sounds like he's struggling to get the words crammed into the tempo. but has potential.