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[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

My cousin spins DnB every tuesday, and from that I've gotten into it. I took a shot at making some stuff in FL tonight. It ain't good, it's crude, unfinished and not polished, but I feel that it has something to it. No, I'm not a musician (even though I've played piano for 13 yrs, but i have no keyboard), I'm just trying to not be bored. Anyways, check it out and tell me what it needs:

http://rapidshare.de/files/18537062/disnewdnbjoint.mp3.html

Get at me.

-Dave

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[bimma85 5,000+ posts]

//content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/confused.gif.e820e0216602db4765798ac39d28caa9.gif I clicked free and it says something about paying.

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

Wha?

 

[Jameseypoo 5,000+ posts]

you just have to navigate through it, you don't have to pay.

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

Yeah, you have to wait to get your download ticket. I had a premium account so you could bypass that, but I never continued it.

 

[iceteebone 5,000+ posts]

My cousin spins DnB every tuesday, and from that I've gotten into it. I took a shot at making some stuff in FL tonight. It ain't good, it's crude, unfinished and not polished, but I feel that it has something to it. No, I'm not a musician (even though I've played piano for 13 yrs, but i have no keyboard), I'm just trying to not be bored. Anyways, check it out and tell me what it needs:
http://rapidshare.de/files/18537062/disnewdnbjoint.mp3.html

Get at me.

-Dave

**laughs *** off picturing gary coleman playing beethoven**

 

[Idealrealist 10+ year member]

not bad

 

[SAG3 5,000+ posts]

its allright

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

If it's allright, then tell me what it needs to be better...as I had asked.

 

[iceteebone 5,000+ posts]

idk it reminded of lou bega mambo # 5 and that isn't good //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/frown.gif.a3531fa0534503350665a1e957861287.gif

 

[Jameseypoo 5,000+ posts]

If it's allright, then tell me what it needs to be better...as I had asked.

too much stuff going on at some points, needs a better music generator.. sounded, um.. cheap maybe? not really sure how to explain it.

 

[PV Audio 5,000+ posts]

Probably //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/smile.gif.1ebc41e1811405b213edfc4622c41e27.gif

I don't know how to use fruity loops, let alone make drum and bass.