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[NikoM 10+ year member]

1. dont have access to email

2. need to have what i wrote on a computer so i can send it to my computer at my house

3. so im copy pasting what i've got so far to here, car audio.com, so i can retrieve it and put it on my computer at my house.

read if you'd like lmao. its intro + intro to my first paragraph

The twentieth century was an age of new technology and advancements. Advances in not only the way we lived our daily lives, but the ways man-kind could fight war. Countries all over the world were rapidly increasing what they knew about the world and how machines work, how chemicals reacted, how life goes on every day, an overall booming of intelligence in the science and math fields of study throughout developed countries was occurring. With vast amounts of knowledge being obtained by Great Britain, France, Austria-Hungary, and Germany, new ways to construct more efficient and powerful machines for agricultural or economic benefits all the way to engineering new weaponry never seen or dreamed before to use in case of times of war had been created in the brains of these developed countries. These advancements in these developed countries would come at a price money could not pay for when human emotions are thrown into the mix of machine. Greed, selfishness, never being satisfied and the quest to control literally everything are emotions that will simply and obviously not partner well with machines controlled by said emotions. Thus, a heap of world powers do their share to cross-the-line, little-by-little, of other world powers in the years 1900 to 1914, when finally, Archduke Ferdinand Franz of Austria-Hungary is assassinated and the first World War is set ablaze.

As well as having the best tasting sweet-tea and costly dental bills, the British was armed with an extremely powerful Navy, the most powerful in the world at the time, and controlled the seas in their sector of the globe.

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[BlactimusCrime 10+ year member]

Lol, good use of resources i suppose

 

[MikeofTulsa Moderator]

http://docs.google.com is your friend.

 

[NikoM 10+ year member]

The German military pre-World War One was the strongest military in the world. Yes, Great Britain had a far better Naval army, but looking at the overall picture, the German Empire took the cake. Most people are very familiar with this fact. But with having the best trained military at the time, the German Empire didn’t acquire that without the help of a little something called an economy and an aid by the name of industry. First, the population boomed; In 1871, there were 41 million citizens in the German Empire. 1913 comes around and there were nearly 68 million, an increase of over 50%. The population was certainly there for the German Empire to put to use. Oh boy did the Germans “do work.” A little insight of the boom in the German Empire is as follows: steel production multiplied by twelve in 30 years, coal production multiplied by nearly five in 30 years, manufactures multiplied by four, exports multiplied by three, exports of chemicals multiplied by three, and exports of machinery multiplied by five. By 1914, Germany was the most powerful industrial nation in Europe. It was obvious they were the strongest world power pre-World War One with the best army and the best industry in Europe.

Now comes in the giant regarding size, Russia. Russia was filled with resources due to where it is geographically. With these resources, Russia made lots and lots of money. They were an extremely wealthy nation. With all of this wealth, Russia constructed an enormous army. The Russian military was the overall largest military out of the world powers. Yet Russia forgot something to spend their money on, they forgot to pay the transportation bill. With the massive amount of quantity in men, Russia severely lacked a transportation system. The roads and railways of Russia were, sub-par, with that being a compliment. Overall, Russia was similar to Germany, instead, their military lacked quality.

 

[benzmansl65amg 10+ year member]

took the cake haha

 

[dumple 5,000+ posts]

The German military pre-World War One was the strongest military in the world. Yes, Great Britain had a far better Naval armywhat?, but looking at the overall picture, the German Empire took the cakeshould not say this in an essay. Most people are very familiar with this fact.sentence fragment But with having the best trained military at the time, the German Empire didn’t acquire that without the help of a little something called an economy and an aid by the name of industry. First, the population boomed; In 1871, there were 41 million citizens in the German Empire. 1913 comes around and there were nearly 68 million, an increase of over 50%. The population was certainly there for the German Empire to put to use. Oh boy did the Germans “do work.” A little insight of the boom in the German Empire is as follows: steel production multiplied by twelve in 30 years, coal production multiplied by nearly five in 30 years, manufactures multiplied by four, exports multiplied by three, exports of chemicals multiplied by three, and exports of machinery multiplied by five. By 1914, Germany was the most powerful industrial nation in Europe. It was obvious they were the strongest world power pre-World War One with the best army and the best industry in Europe.Now comes in the giant regarding size, Russia. Russia was filled with resources due to where it is geographically. With these resources, Russia made lots and lots of money. They were an extremely wealthy nation. With all of this wealth, Russia constructed an enormous army. The Russian military was the overall largest military out of the world powers. Yet Russia forgot something to spend their money on, they forgot to pay the transportation bill. With the massive amount of quantity in men, Russia severely lacked a transportation system. The roads and railways of Russia were, sub-par, with that being a compliment. Overall, Russia was similar to Germany, instead, their military lacked quality.

I dont feel like reading this but im assuming the rest needs work too, hope someone is going to proof read this for you.

 

[Louisiana_CRX 5,000+ posts]

someday you'll miss school //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/fyi.gif.9f1f679348da7204ce960cfc74bca8e0.gif

 

[NikoM 10+ year member]

Got a 100/100 in it. Best grade in my class and it's an AP class.

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[dumple 5,000+ posts]

did you get it proof read ?

 

[nateberrier 10+ year member]

highschool teaches you almost nothing //content.invisioncic.com/y282845/emoticons/fyi.gif.9f1f679348da7204ce960cfc74bca8e0.gif and google docs probably wont work either if he has email blocked. you have to sign into google for that and whatever filter they use probably just nails it all. the instant search really messed up a lot of shiz. flash drives are a good idea too

 

[NikoM 10+ year member]

did you get it proof read ?

Nope. It was for AP History man lol. He doesn't give a **** about grammar, as long as it makes sense, it's fine grammatically. He was looking more into the accuracy of the facts, points, history, etc.

 

[dumple 5,000+ posts]

wow for an ap class i would fail the **** out of that, are you in retard ap classes?

 

[NikoM 10+ year member]

wow for an ap class i would fail the **** out of that, are you in retard ap classes?

Retard AP? Nah man. Its a semester class called World in Conflict that focuses on primarily World War One. He told us "this is considered to be an AP class, yet we don't put the label AP on it, I don't know why though."

 

[dumple 5,000+ posts]

ld??

 

[NikoM 10+ year member]

ld??

LMAO no. It was an elective.